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This story had my eyes watering... I felt yashas pain... I want to jump with him... DAMNNN WHAT A STORY!!! BUT MANNN WHEN IS THE NEXT CHHAAAPPPPIIEE.. CURSE. U. NARAKU. BASTARD.. INU&KOGA 4EEVVEERR!!!!!

Oh this is a real cool fic! You should write more!

^_^^_^ (I Love Twins!)

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Have I mentioned I want more? ^__^ No? Then let me tell you:
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update soon

I love it dont be nervious about this chapter it was great I was about to cry when Kouga kicked Inu out then i Kept reading and seen that it wasn't his doing You are doing good Keep it up and you know i am always here to support you

Wow! You really threw my for a loop with Kag being a servert and lover of Naraku's. That she's insane and even has her family under a spell. A bit much, I think. But hey! You made it work. And it's still extremely entertaining. Boy I really thought that Koga had used Inu too. Don't scare me like that again. ^_^ Nicely done.

Ohh! So good! update soon!

I like it, thought the rape part was a little dry.

Wow! This story just keeps getting better! You should update so we can find out what happens! ;) Seriously, this is a really good fic.

My only problem with this is tense. You keep switching between past and present tense. You should pick one and run with it. It's less confusing to the reader.

Other than that, I love it! I'll be watching for the next update!

**Zeph**

Awww! That was so wonderful! I'm SO glad you're not going to leave this just a one-shot. I can't wait to see the next chapter! Please update soon! Great work!

**Zeph**