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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is my third review of the same chapter. The first one was wiped out by the crash, but I am lost as to what happened to the second one. I reallly LOVED this chapter. What a tempest of a story! I rocked back and forth from LMFAO to heart-pounding emotions. What a job you do on us fans! It will be exceptionally cruel if we have to wait a month on this shocking cliffhanger;and we are talking about dangling from a high cliff, too. My favorite part was, "InuYasha, I can see your butt crack!" I was glad he made some positive progress. InuYasha and Kagome work so hard to get anywhere with their relationship, in all stories. It was kind of a 'feel good' chapter, I thought. I had other comments on Sesshoumaru and the rest, but after reviewing so much, I will leave them for another time . The more important thought is, 'will they continue a public conversation while half naked?' What an original plot line. As usual, it is wonderful of you to share. Cynbad146
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Inuyasha/Kagome story I've read yet! Deffinately well written. Please update soon, I cant wait to read your next chapter.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am reposting my review because I really like your story and this last two chapters are great. Shippou performance..wow..o_O and the shaming situation of Inuyasha and Kagome XD really hilarious. *Thinking in a posible fanart*
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just discovered this story adn i must say, you deserve every accolade you get! Amazing story!! Emotionally mature, funny, sweet and the characterizations are so on target, it's like Takahashi was on the phone with you giving you lines to write! I'm so impressed and upset I didn't discover this fic earlier! fabulous work!!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!! i love it! i can't believe that! horribly embarrasing! ugh! lol! but great update! i hope you can get the next chapter out soon too!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow awsome.. woah
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i am truly blown by your fic... it's writing style is so clean ( thrust me i really apreciate it 'cause i'm form mexico, so i can undestand it better if it's well writen...=)
But really, just few stories has struck me like yours, how you portarit the characters, how you make the story so alike the real one, wow it must be hard... but you are doing a terrific job, as much as i wish i coudn't read the hole story (i start it late and now i'm just falling infornt of my pc, but i can guarantee that i'lll come back to read the rest of it.)
Congratulations for the awards you win, you truly deserved them!!! And thanks for posting your story you really make some people days!!! (like mine)
But really, just few stories has struck me like yours, how you portarit the characters, how you make the story so alike the real one, wow it must be hard... but you are doing a terrific job, as much as i wish i coudn't read the hole story (i start it late and now i'm just falling infornt of my pc, but i can guarantee that i'lll come back to read the rest of it.)
Congratulations for the awards you win, you truly deserved them!!! And thanks for posting your story you really make some people days!!! (like mine)
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look i read my review and i had so many gramatical mistakes, i'm sorry i know you don`t like them, but trust me, i am falling asleep right now, so.. sorry, and hope you update any time soon... see ya in the next review!! =)
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good can't wait until the next time you update
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just found your story this morning and instead of doing the million things on my list-of-things-to-do on my day off I wound up reading your story straight through. I think the character development/relationship development is great. The awkward situations poor Inuyasha and Kagome find themselves in are hilarious. Now I find myself having to anxiously await updates! Keep up the good work. I think you have real talent and I hope you take on more stories after this one ends. If you still have an email list for chapter updates I would love to be on it. Thanks again.