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for What A Girl Needs

by SoutasSister

person Neko-xan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I've been reading your story for a while and yes this is the first time I review (forgive me I'm lazy >.> ), but just to let you know...I love it this far. This chapter just screamed for a review. Oh my! Fluffy-sama is so cool >.> soooo kuuuute...so adora--ahem, anyways, good job. I really was thinking that he would want her as a mate, but yay! 'Tis fortunate Rin he wants. I laughed in the part that Kagome questions if Rin would even want him as a mate. I thought "please woman you MUST be blind and only open your eyes for Inu if you can even doubt Rin will fall for Sesshy." "He looked back at her with supreme confidence and merely raised an elegant eyebrow in response. She got the impression he was questioning her intelligence." LOL!!!!! His response was just perfect, "'I’m not conceited, just convinced.." xDDDDDDDDDD!!!! Oh the chapter was intense, but that had to be my favorite part. Oh I'm enjoying your story so much--so creative--go you! Oh I am sleepy it's already 2:10 a.m. o_ó... I must wake up early tomorrow tata
person inugirl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it love it keep going! Can't wait for the union :P That was a cute ending at the bottom of the well, boy will they be embarrassed hahaha!
person Marisaiko
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Poor InuYasha!! This chapter was really amazing and funny!! I hope you will update very soon.

Ja ne!!
person Destani
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person smurfsicle
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon!!!! I thought I reveiwed this story when you first published it on here, hmm and i looked for it and now i have found it again!!! please let me know when you update this is an AWESOME story!!! karlaslusher@gmail.com
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so cool. and the ending was funny as hell!
person Snowfall
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very long time ago, I read one or two chapters of this fic. I came back to it and had a wonderful time. The humor, the angst, the action, Sesshoumaru *sigh*, everyone so in character. Not boring at all. You had me laughing and teary eyed. Few can do that. Wonderful fic. I look forward to more chapters.

Snowfall
person subetehoshi
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review for you, and firstly, I want to apologize for not reviewing earlier...I don't know why I didn't...maybe sheer laziness or whatnot...but there's got to be a first for everything, I guess...well with that said...

This story has got to be one of my favourites out there...you definately have a way with words. Your story has sent me through a torrent of emotions-- from happy, to sad, to angry, and back to happy-- I love it! It's very interesting to watch as this story develops...it has taken on a turn of events that I wouldn't have predicted, but I think it's absolutely fantastic!! And the way you capture everyone's (the cast, shall we say) thoughts and feelings...it always leaves me wanting more! Good work!

Again, sorry for not reviewing earlier...I'll review every chapter from now on!

Thanks for all your hard work...it, at least, makes me one HAPPY person!! :)
person subetehoshi
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I can't get over how you can capture everyones emotions...like Inuyasha's here...how he's SOOO ANGRY AND FRUSTRATED with Kagome gone....and OH SO awwed/shocked (like, "holy shit, she actually came back!") and happy (would you call it happy? haha) that she comes back... I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!

oohhh at the bottom of the well, NICE!!

sensational work...I can't even put words to it...

can't wait for the next chapter (but I know it will SO be worth it!)
person drake220
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear god, that scene between inu and shippou was hysterical! I don't think i've laughed out loud from a fic in a very long time. This is so insanely enjoyable! and on the bottom of the well?!?! Sheer smut genius!! I've had 'em do it IN the wellhouse but not the well. I bow to you, Queen of all things fic-related. bravo and update again soon!!