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for What A Girl Needs

by SoutasSister

person shiko-chan
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this fic is unbelievably good. i can't help grinning all over my stupid face after reading it. "Inuyasha, I can see your butt crack"--MAN i love that monk!

please please update soon! ^.^
person Sayanna The Rover
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahem, pardon my long absence...I owe you some well-deserved reviews, ne? ^_^ Still enjoying the story, as ever, yet I couldn't help notice something about Sango in the earlier chapters: She's seems...very shy. Granted, she and Kagome as of late have been having intimate discussions and it could be expected, but she seems a bit OOC. I guess I'd assume she'd be more able to take control of a situation (I also assume that she's slightly older than Kagome, and is as steady as a rock in most scenarios--save those including her brother and the actions pertaining to Miroku). But it took me a while to mull over this, so it's not a big deal, if you know what I mean ^_^ I still really love the story!!
person Sayanna The Rover
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What happened to those rings Souta and Kagome picked out for our favorite monk and demon exterminator? Did you momentarily forget about them, or do you plan on Kagome presenting them to their intended owners at an appointed time? lol Cute way she had to gage houshi-sama's ring size, ne? ^_^ Love it!!!
person Jessalyn
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I've been following this story for a while now, and it's easy to enjoy! There are too many stories around here that are completely off-character, with no plot and no grammar---or worse yet, no balance between the (melo)drama and humor. Fancy that: using humor in a story! Luckily, yours appears to be the diamond in the rough. Can't wait for an update.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person cocla
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Inuyasha fics I have read, please continue! :)
person Melissa
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know exactly what a girl needs. ANOTHER CHAPTER. I am dying here. PLZ.
person Inuaru
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love your story. You were able to keep everyone ine character while bringing to life a really cool plot. You really rule. I can't wait for the next chapter; it's nice to see a well-written piece of fanfiction. Thanks for bringing it to AFF.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN, what a way to end that chapter. I cannot imagine how i would feel to be in his position. The humilation! Lol, hot damn.
Anyway, good job. Nothing to complain about. I look forward to your next chapter!
~fern
person Urgazhi
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters, I really liked both of the chapters.

Overall you did a really good job on them :)

-Urgazhi