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for What A Girl Needs

by SoutasSister

person XxSangoxX *not signed in*
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely... i am eagerly looking forward to the next installment.. it's three thirty seven i have to get up at six but i stayed up to read the rest.

what can i say.. i was hooked.

XxSangoxX
person bettychan
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait until the next chapter. Hope you can post it soon.
person kashudoreineko
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was WONDERFUL - and so super duper long.
I've missed this story in the past months since I first started reading it.
person ~ME
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You Tease!! I want the next chapter *pouts* and I was SO excited ................. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeee ^_~
person sexxikitty
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story because you use all the emotions so people can relate to this story. you have a strong plot and ya make it interesting too so readers arent looking for the only "interesting" parts in the story i also love how you use everyday fears and create a compelling strory around it, basically i cant wait until you finish all the chapters. it is great and i can see why you won
sexxykitty
person Tokaia
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but something in your first chapter bothers me greatly. You had Kagome say that she can't get pregnant unless she stops birth control. This is simply not true. Birth control pills are only 97% effective. I should know from personal experience. I hope no other women or girls read that and think it's true. You can certainly get pregnant on birth control. NO BIRTH CONTROL IS 100% EFFECTIVE! Not unless you opt for surgical sterilization. Even then, 1 in 1000 surgeries fail.
person lindsay
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if this story was still a work in progress or if you've finished it. I hope not because it is very well written and thought out. It's nice to know that people still include a plot in a romance story. Can't wait for more!
person Tushuri
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope you update soon!
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi :} ur story is pretty good, very different from the same old bullshit about Inu and Kags, it's good to read sth creative :D please update it, dont give up on it, pleease. kisses ;**
person gretel_chan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I haven't been into Inu/Kag stories for a while, just because I haven't liked what's out there. This story has renewed my faith in this pairing. Thank you, and please continue!