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So is Sessomaru going to try and take Kagome or is he actually going to try and hook Inuyasha and her up by berrating him? Good story

O yeah, Sesshoumaru is super-stealth mode.
He's on a mission. A mission of luuurv. Well---
Maybe not. I commend your coolness.

oh baby! let me ride you like a pony!!! lol!!!! damn... i wasnt even reading the AN but that really stuck out and so i read the whole thing... :P anyhow, that was a great chapter. ohoh!! and sess is gonna tell inu???? sweet!! hahah!! that's gonna be hilarious! poor inu. also, i like the length of your chapters. good job... update soon... and whatnot...

lol... i wonder what miroku's gonna do! i could totally see him searching through all of her stuff and finding that book... or will sess get it first? miroku's gonna be so damn happy... lol...

NONO!!!! DON'T U DARE LESSEN THE DETAILS!!!! This story is one of the best I have ever read as the way it is!! I have read all four chapters in one sitting, and now my eyes feel like they have been fried on a sidewalk on a 110 degree day...... but anyway.. I luv the long chapters, and the detail is great! The progression is a little slow, but that's part of what makes it so good!! anyway, I hope to hear another chapter veryveryveryveryvery soon, okie??? YAY!!! I shall anxiously await your update, tank u n ja ne!!! ^-^

Please let someone BEAT the sense into Inuyasha... I really am enjoying your story... From Kagome's talk with Sango - I was thinking about how she needed someone to help her gather up the pieces of herself after InuYasha leaves her and what a poor girl then quickly switched to a grumbling ticked off girl grabbing a rolled up newspaper to whack our favourite Baka Yasha on the nose... please continue your story it is very good and you have captured the seriousness of the mood perfectly...

Sorry I didn't review for the last chapter, but I couldn't think of anything to say. That chapter and this one are both so good, and I didn't want to start repeating myself, that would get boring fast. At the moment I'm cheering for Sesshoumaru to drop the verbal bomb on InuYasha. heheh I can't wait. As I might have said before, one of the reasons I like certain fics is the way that they describe the emotions and the way that they respond to situations like this one. This has to be one of first fics in a while that actually is going at a somewhat slow pace, of course it is speeding up a bit. As you put in your author's notes at the bottom, you can't see them being so aggresive at the start. I agree with you. Too many fics have it the other way, and I'm left with the question, 'How does InuYasha know what to do?' XP. That just bothers me. Then again if it is a well writen lemon then I don't mind, not at all. On another note, the rate at which you are up dating is ... ... um... I can't describe it but, REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I makes me feel all warm inside that I can come home after a horrible day and read the next chapter. (No I am NOT exagerating!! How dare you think that!!!) Please continue with this wonderful piece of art. All i can say is 'Thank-you' Zincpaw

Again, the dialogue between Kagome & Sango is excellent. Can't wait to see what bombshell Sess drops on Inu. 0.o

This is a good story and I will continue to keep up with it....

i think its comin out really well.........keep it up