rate_review Reviews

Hmmmmm... this is a very nice story, provided it ends up being Inu/Kag. I've also noted the subtle differences that show that you're using the personalities of the manga characters more than the anime. I've only read 4 books of the manga, but the differences between it and the anime are there. Glad I'm not the only one who noticed. Update! Onegai?! Arigato (I think I spelled those words right... I couldn't resist writing a little in japanese.)

I am really liking this story a WHOLE LOT, and I like that you seem to have a real good grasp on when your next chapters will come. It gets on my nerves when people don't write for a month b/c I'm so excited to know what happens next. I already have to wait for Movie 4, and I spent what seemed like an eternity for the episodes... now that I'm into fan fic, I've almost lost all my patience!!! But this story is a really good read.... I like the plot thickening and twisting.. and that you are trying to include plot lines for each couple, and the birth control discussions make me laugh alone outloud, my roomate thinks I'm crazy, now.... I hope Rin gets involved more in the story.. I love Rin, she's like me as a little girl! Except, you know, the fact that I'm an American, and not in Fuedal Times.
Well, anyways
I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter ;)
Thanks for giving me something to do instead of studying!!!
Daphne

READ up to chap 2 and chap one was a little long winded but good and so was two, persoanlly I think M/S should get equal time in the story but thats just me, so many I/K misunderstanding fic that take 20 chap before it is resolved BUT this so far has kept my attention

I make a habit of reading AN but your are so so so long that I skipped chap 2.

anyway this is good lol with kouga hearing and Sess and Miroku, about to read another chap

CHAP 3, want to say I love the overall matureness of this fic, love the Souta and Kagome moments and her being honest and open great! LMAO don't blame Miroku! he have up getting some when he met Sango and now his chance!

Chap 5-Sess? Ugh I can never see them together but I like that it made INu jealous and maybe that will wake him up, would love to see kagome and Hojo kiss a little or something or just see her have fun at a party(your story up to you) good chap, and still want the picnic with Miroku and Sango!

Sorry, but I have to say this:
Inuyasha Got served. What now?! [ahem--- thankyou.]

And yes, a twister has been thrown into the angsty
pond--- what terror will this bring? Will Inu get some?
Or will Sesshie be the one? Hum hum.

What is Sesshoumaru's role in all of this? And you mentioned Kouga being around in the second chapter, what part does he play? From what I have so far Sesshoumaru is trying to get his brother a girl. It seems kind of funny since they don't like each other very much, but then again with them being the only Inus left survival of their race should be firt and foremost. It does have a lot of details, but this way it lets the reader really get into the fic and almost feel what each character feels. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. Theres no rush I just want to see how Sesshoumaru will tell Inuyasha what he knows and then what Inuyasha will do when he finds out.

i absolutely love your story - i can't wait for the moment inuyasha finds out kagome really does love him, and i am patient for the lemons... but NOT for the chapters! please keep writing and post often. I look forward to the next and every chapter.

AHHHHHH!!!! u left it at a cliffy u better write more really soon

i still love the story. it's going along great. i'm glad that sango at least was able to talk a wee bit of sense into Kagome about hobo. :-/ GRRRRR. he really pisses me off at points, but maybe that's just me and his ignorance. i'm really interested to see Fluffykins interactoin in all of this. i can really see him as the antagonist throughout it but i think inu is filling that gap pretty well himself. it worries me though, cause sesshiles isn't exactly the...matchmaker??? anywho's, great chapter and keep it up!!!