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for What A Girl Needs

by SoutasSister

person lazzykane
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that's what he needs to kick in the a$$ myself ........so please e-mail me when you update,,,,,,ok
person Miss_Marilyn69
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yada Yada Yada Yada Yada....
person Fran
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this latest chapter. Are you going to have Inuyasha go to Kagome's time to get her? When is going to confess is feelings for her? I hope that Kagome dosen't do anything with Hojo. I'll be looking for your next chapter, hope you put it up soon. BTW, I like the way that you are portraying Sesshomaru. I just he dosent end up with Kagome either.
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I have only managed to read the first chapter, but i will finish. I think it is pretty good with what you're trying to do. You have good points and ideas, but I think a little differently. I'm not to crazy about Kagome or Kikyou honestly, but I do like Kikyou more. I think she is severly understood, but that's my opinion. I will not let my own like or dislike for a particular character get in the way of what I think of your fic. From what I have read, it's really good. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it.
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just came back to explain myself to you. LOL. The reaction I get when I tell people I'm not a big Kagome fan, but posted a challenge involving Kagome is quite comical. The only reason I posted the challenge is because I wanted to see something realistic between the characters. Even though I would personally like to see Sango and Inuyasha together, it's kind of far fetched and a little weird. I am happy to have included you in this challenge. :)
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is so cool! i love it! but what will happen now?
person PerroChica
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::hugs you:: YES!!! You updated!!! yes, I am an official jerk for not reviewing first hand when i came across this delicious little piece....but...well, go figure. you can hurt me later. Any how, love the details (and physchology) so far...you've obviously given this a lot of thought, and I must say: you've got them nailed down to a T. Keep up the good work!! and I'll keep up the feedback--for what it's worth ^_^
person srg1
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good! Its so funny too! Kagome is getting all kinds of interests in her. All from one talk. Poor Inu. I hope Kouga appears soon. And I can't wait to read what Kagome's reaction will be.
person Rawben
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol.. good chapter.. altho for the next one, i want 3 things: miroku, sango, and awkwardness...:D lol... yey for updates!
person PerroChica
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::bangs the computer moniter:: that's all?!! Please update really soon!!!!