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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 14!! It had so much feeling into it! There frist time together was awsome! I can not wait to see what more you have planned for them! Keep up the excellent work ^_^
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
"This was the last time she would be late in returning from her mysterious time. This was the last time she would miss an appointment with him. This was the last time he would be made to wait for an explanation of the strange writing that accompanied the pictures in the mating book."
I was just catching up and had to tell you that I laughed out loud at that one. Seriously. On to more chapters!
Snow
"This was the last time she would be late in returning from her mysterious time. This was the last time she would miss an appointment with him. This was the last time he would be made to wait for an explanation of the strange writing that accompanied the pictures in the mating book."
I was just catching up and had to tell you that I laughed out loud at that one. Seriously. On to more chapters!
Snow
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful wonderful chapter. The lemon was a very realistic first time lemon with alot of love and trust and affection. thank you so much for sharing this great story.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Except for the occasional interruption, I read the last few chapters clean through because I couldn't stop. I loved the manipulative, yet murderous Sesshoumaru. Very, very plausible. That was just too much fun. It was great when Kagome blasted the hell out of him. He deserved it if for no other reason than to punish Sesshoumaru for torturing Inuyasha. But, I guess it did help him to achieve the goal...I think. Wouldn't I love to be Rin! (eh, bunny trails) Sesshoumaru really is smart, gathering his allies and making them have an honor debt to him. But, everything that he is doing know makes one wonder whether or not he disowned Inuyasha. That's such a mystery, and I'm babbling... His treatment of Shippou and the results, Shippou exposing his true self was great. And that event was very heartwarming. It will be interesting to see how Shippou does in battle now, especially after he is trained. He should do really well.
And, Inuyasha and Kagome are going to need to learn to trust each other a bit more if they are going to confront someone as devious as Naraku. The approach/avoidance issue was very well done, and I love your idea of having Inuyasha attempting to do everything right to satisfy Kagome. I'm so glad that he didn't screw it up when he decided that he was going to immediately mate her at the hotspring. Oh, Sessshoumaru leaving the dagger was so funny! All of the near misses with those two were very amusing and a nice build up. The well incident was very amusing. Poor Inuyasha, just couldn't pick a private place.
I just love your depiction of Kouga. He is honorable, just a bit...off. LOL Poor little wolf cub. I feel sorry for Sango now too. She's really in for it. And poor Miroku is going to finally feel what Inuyasha did and perhaps he will be a bit ashamed of his responses to the interactions between Kouga, Kagome, and Inuyasha.
LOL Shippou and Inuyasha conniving together was great, a familial type thing. I loved Shippou helping out Inuyasha. Those two really do care about each other.
Oh, I really want to know if those hair combs were a family heirloom or if they were just something that Sesshoumaru gave to them. That whole thing with Myoga was well done. I loved the part where Sesshoumaru first addresses Myoga, LOL, to Myoga sweating it out at the cave. That was great.
I just loved the whole gag with the book and then ending it there in the lemon had great effect.
You've done a wonderful job here, not only with the story, but with your writing skill. Your characters are very IC. Thanks for that one. I know that I haven't covered everything. But, I've done the best that I can. Keep up the good work!
Snow
And, Inuyasha and Kagome are going to need to learn to trust each other a bit more if they are going to confront someone as devious as Naraku. The approach/avoidance issue was very well done, and I love your idea of having Inuyasha attempting to do everything right to satisfy Kagome. I'm so glad that he didn't screw it up when he decided that he was going to immediately mate her at the hotspring. Oh, Sessshoumaru leaving the dagger was so funny! All of the near misses with those two were very amusing and a nice build up. The well incident was very amusing. Poor Inuyasha, just couldn't pick a private place.
I just love your depiction of Kouga. He is honorable, just a bit...off. LOL Poor little wolf cub. I feel sorry for Sango now too. She's really in for it. And poor Miroku is going to finally feel what Inuyasha did and perhaps he will be a bit ashamed of his responses to the interactions between Kouga, Kagome, and Inuyasha.
LOL Shippou and Inuyasha conniving together was great, a familial type thing. I loved Shippou helping out Inuyasha. Those two really do care about each other.
Oh, I really want to know if those hair combs were a family heirloom or if they were just something that Sesshoumaru gave to them. That whole thing with Myoga was well done. I loved the part where Sesshoumaru first addresses Myoga, LOL, to Myoga sweating it out at the cave. That was great.
I just loved the whole gag with the book and then ending it there in the lemon had great effect.
You've done a wonderful job here, not only with the story, but with your writing skill. Your characters are very IC. Thanks for that one. I know that I haven't covered everything. But, I've done the best that I can. Keep up the good work!
Snow
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Your telling of Shippou's inner conflict was amazing. Especially loved that section of the story.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I so totally love this fic! Just the right amount of sexual tension through out! You have got to finish - not prematurely like our beloved hanyou, ofcourse - but I reeaally look forward to the conclusion of the story - and er, the lemon!
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update A.S.A.P!
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update A.S.A.P!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Please Update! Your Fic is so great! I love it! I wanna see what happens now!! Please!!! Update!!!
Este bellisimo El fic me encanta xD es lo mejor...
You're the best xD
Update damnit! xD!!! Jajajaj!!
Atte: Hai-Chan *O*^
Este bellisimo El fic me encanta xD es lo mejor...
You're the best xD
Update damnit! xD!!! Jajajaj!!
Atte: Hai-Chan *O*^
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, PLEASE continue this! There are few other stories that grab me and pull me in the way this one does. It would be a crime against all things awesome if you stopped!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God!! you are the best author ever!!!
ur story the way you make me feel the exact same way the characters do ur amazing! you have truly mastered the art of story telling!!! i will be hoping to hear more from you!!! please more!!
ur story the way you make me feel the exact same way the characters do ur amazing! you have truly mastered the art of story telling!!! i will be hoping to hear more from you!!! please more!!