rate_review Reviews

Quite engrossing. Good job.

GOOD chapter-the picnic LMAO I can totally see Miroku plotting and don't blame him. again don't read the magna but I like how this is semi realistic. Not to mushy but more real and I like their older persoanlities. A little upset that her friend said she was dressing slutty maybe she just wanted to be sexy and she not a little girl anymore.

Any way very very good chap

wow nice chapter...bad cliffy, can wait tell the next update

I LOVE this Fic!!! I love how every character is so much like the anime and magna. I would also like to complement you on the length of your chapters. I hate it when I read a chapter and its just starting to get good then its over, but yours keeps me interested the while time, feels like something is accomplished. I can't wait till the next update!

I hope that you will have Inuyasha talk with Kagome and explain himself to her in the next chapter. The anticipation is driving me bonkers.

honestly, it's not very often you hear good reason for Kikyo's actions towards inu or for that matter, her general disposition. you did a great job wtih her in this chapter. i really don't like her character in the series just becasue of her choices that she made (like the jewel to naraku....grrr...) but you really got to me in this chapter. i really feel for her, and pity her (which is different). very well written. very well done!!!! i can't wait to see what happens with Kagome and Inu ::sigh:: i have a feeling it ain't gonna be that easy. as for Miroku, i was worried for a moment. seemingly going to take advantage of a druken Sango, i'm glad that he didn't. would have been bad. but again, you wrote it very well to give us a good glimpse at the man ::cough:: under the robe ::cough:: (so not meant that way). but you really did get some great insite in on miro in this chapter. props. keep it up!!!!

Hello.This chappie seems slow compared to the other chaps. Oh and I hope you put inu out of his misery soon. :)

Yay! An update! This story is really, really good. I can't wait for the next update!

Ahaha--- he ran into the side of the inside of the well.

ohhh! that was so good! i can't wait till the next chapter!! :O and for miroku to steal that book! ;)