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I Freakin love this story....please please update

I really like this fic!!! its great hope you update soon

ack... i've spent over a week looking for an update..... please please please please please please please please please!! heh... i make it sound like i don't have better things to do, but let's face it, it's now summer break and i don't have a job yet, so other than chillin with friends, i don't have anything to do!

Yippee! I remember now. I read the first and second chapter and then my computer went haywire and I lost all my cookies. It still keeps losing them. Anywho, yay, I got to read some more. Thanks for being a grammar freak. I love your sentence structure and you have a nice vocabulary. I almost cried when Inuyasha's heart broke and he cried out at the god tree. *sob* You had a great idea for putting Sess in a position to accept humans. And, now that has led to a whole new sequence of events. Great imagination! I look forward to your next chapter.

Snowfall

very good chapter. i love the character that you have put to Sesshoumaru. i want to say i had a feeling that he wans't after Kagome, but i think that would be tainted. i alwasy have loved fluffles (mostly becasue he's more arrogant then inuyasha and gets away with it) but...uhh....yeah, you really nailed him on the head here. great chapter adn man, i cant' wait to see kagome's awaited return to yash after all of this (and then the explinatoin of her going off with sessh for training...talk about the shit hitting the fan) great story, as always. keep it up!!!

Sigh, Great ending for the last chapter! I don't know how I'll be able to wait a week for the next chapter. But a week is not too
long. But I can't wait! Anyway your story is great, I'll be checking for your update. And is Kagome going to find out about Koga?

this is a great fic. very in character overall. i really like chapter 7. the dialogue and pacing are very well thought out. i look forward to future updates!

fabulous hon!

I just really love your story. It's just...wow! I love the story line. It is original but with a twist. A really interesting and funny one. I love the whole Yuka and Hojo thing. It gets rid of the complications for Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship. I really do hope that they have a happy ending. Update soon please

hey! I've been following you story, and i have to say it is definitely my favorite! i really can't wait until the next update. Please keep writing! but one thing that did bother me, and i have to say it jsut to be picky, is how out of character sesshoumaru is in this chapter. to be brutally honest, i found the entire scenario with him unbelievable, and i don't see how he can train kagome when he hasn't spent any time with mikos, etc. Just so you know. I understand and support author creativity, but you had been so realistic with the characters up to this point - again, it jsut seemed so unbelievable. i was hoping for more inuysha/ kagome interaction! I'm not trying to flame you, just let you know that i really do enjoy this story (and the fact that you actually use grammar) and i look forwad to the weekly updates - but this chapter jsut doesn't sit right with me. Please don't be discouraged! this has been a great story so far!