rate_review Reviews

This is a great story and one of my favorites! It is so well thought out and written. I anxiously await further updates.

I think its hysterical that Sesshomaru ended up with the book!

Cathy

As I am not very good at such things I'll just say this. I like it.

i'm so glad to hear that you're okay and your family is safe. thanks so much for updating too.

sorry for not reviewing you sooner, just had a baby. i love this chap, and poor delusional kouga.

can't wait to see what else you have in mind for this killer story!

::wimpers:: you have yet to replenish your masterpiece with chapter ten!!!!!!!!!! Please do so as soon as humany possible!!!!! ::gives you Shippou Eyes...'puppy look ' has been bashed to death lol::

Very well done!!!! I really enjoyed the chapter. Cliche' but true. I like all the angst that InuYasha is going through over Kagome. It is a nice change from Kagome angsting over InuYasha and Kikyio. This is a nice change. The lime was very well wrote, I thougt. A very limey lime. You are doing a really fine job. Do not change a thing. Thank you for letting us enjoy your hard work. Cynbad146

"congrats you deseve it !!!!"

Well, I must say that this lovely piece of adult fan fiction definitely deserves a review from me- I enjoyed reading all nine, current chapters, of this story, even sat on the edge of my chair through most of it, and I must admit that you have pure talent! Your descriptions- wonderful! The characters themselves- absolutely fantastic! Your writing is so fluid and gripping; was it you who said this was your first story? Well, if it was, then, wow! You have great potential to become a true author! I asolutely can't wait until you update with chapter ten, for I am looking so forward to reading it. Keep up the good work!

Until your next update...

Adios!

Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)

excellent long chap! congrats on the grandbaby! and i love everything about your story, please continue as you see fit, it's your story to share.

and I voted for you! anyway good job until next time

WOW! My sister told me about your story and how good it was and how I had to come and read it, she was right it is amazing! Please try to get your next chapter out sooner than expected, I'm completely hooked! I love your writing style, and the plot, and all of the little quirks. I was giggling so much during the last few chapters. And the length of the last few chapters was wonderful, I was so happy that they were so long. I wish you luck in writing. Congrats on your new grandson and I'm glad all of you are OK.

congratulations os your story!!!!

I read the first paragraphs a week ago, or so, and thought it looked good, so I bookmarked it. Yersteday I started to read the first chapter... and didn't stop until I got to the very end of chapter 9!!! It took me almost eight hours!!! at one piont I was so tired of sitting at the computer that I printed the whole story and took it to bed with me! :D

I really like your plot :) In most fics I read, all the characters act like ten-year-olds, reacting unnaturally to most situations. I like the way you make kagome think... doesn't that happen too often? try to forget one man by going to bed with another... we should already know it DOESN'T work! :D still it happens...

Plus I thin your writing is wonderful... fluent, easy to read... perfect!

Now I can't wait for your next update, hope it will be soon!! I'm glad your daughter's pregnancy ended well even if it was a difficult, and I hope you will enjoy with your new grandson... but please don't abandon us! ;)

Greetings from spain!! :)