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for What A Girl Needs

by SoutasSister

person Ladykaa28
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering who could have picked up the book. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome can come to terms soon and that Sesshoumaru will let her tell Inu why he wanted to talked to her alone. I just want to see what happens when everyone finally understands the meaning of the book.
person gittelbug
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1st off i love the story but what i really like your pov on kikyou. You weren't just like shes a bitch and should die again it was a fair arugement on kikyou i give u props for that good thinking!! anyways awsome chapt and story
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT long chapter! Love all the interaction scenes love how you didn't make Kikyo a villian(she not , just tragic) loved everything seriously. Very good writing and story line. Keep going the way you are! LOL at Sess he's mad about the book! LOL great great great

get well, and be safe
person Alvida
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really well written and I'm really enjoying it. Right now I'm on chapter 4 and I do have a small quibble. I think when Kagome is explaining the contraceptive devices, unless I missed the part where Sango was reading Kagome's health ed book on the sly, to Sango that sperm and egg are a bit technical. I don't know what to suggest in lieu of egg but, like sperm, semen is visible to the naked eye.
person nina
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOMAAAN ! EMAiL MEY WEN U UPDATE iiGHT ??? :D GREAT STOREEEEE !! xxx

xXx SHOWiN LOVE .. BAKiN` COOKiEz xXx
person Peacemaker
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.10 was a very good chapter and the plot is coming together more smoothly now. I can't wait to read the next chapter becuz I am certain that it will be very well done. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Lynn
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great! Sadly it is very common for people to misunderstand each other even if there is no love. But where love is involved, it just gets even more difficoult, doesn't it? Does enyone knows why are humans so affraid of rejection?
Anyways, I hope you are going to finish the next chapter soon, couse your story just makes me want to read it on and on.

(It's a luck that no one was hurt becouse of Rita, other than the roof, that is... I was very sorry to hear that.)
person battousai69
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The fact that Sess picked up the book and is mad he has to wait for an explanation is awesome. I look forward to the next chapter.

Good luck with hurricane Wilma hopefully all will come out unscathed.
person demonqueen
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just thought I would drop a line or two to tell you that I think you have a great story going here. O Boy! Sesshomaru has the missing book that the guys were looking at. Ha! I can just picture Kagome's face if and when Sesshomaru asks her to explain to him some of the pictures and such contained in this book. Wonder how read her face will get. Course it would be a combo of anger and embaressment. Keep updating as soon as possible,please. I can hardly wait to find out what happens next.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SERIUOSLY BEYOND WORTH WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this recent chapter!! YOU rock!!! I love it..Inu finally is starting to get a clue and see beyond his Kikyou blinders to see what his friends also see, thanks to Miroku actually being a good friend to him and NOT ruining it by being disgusting ( as other writers would have him do) and Sesshoumaru should really have gotten it into his head Kagome will not be pushed around by him.. Prephaps he will learn other things ....... ** chokes** ......** coughs** ...... * Wheeze**..... Book ......**chokes** makes interesting balloon being deflated slowly noises for several long minutes.... The Karma Sutra for Lovers... How to Please Your Lover... The Joy of Sex... all dance with Sesshoumaru around her head.... YES Sesshoumaru..... book.... ONE arm.... LOL.. . .. . . ROFLMAO!!!!!!!! I can't get no satisfaction!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Sesshoumaru!!! TOO bad Inu cut his arm off!!! Yep!!! THAT is GREAT!!!!!!! Computer......2000.00 internet connection..... 20.00mnthly......... going online........ free... Reading this story........ ABSOLUTELY BEYOND priceless!!!!!!!!! A Wayne's World moment.... We're not worthy... We're not worthy!!! Thank you!! THANK YOU!!! THANNNNNNNKKKKKK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't for Kagome to EXPLAIN these images, positions, situations to our beloved anime boys!!!!