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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is the story over, or have you just not updated in awhile?
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you are no more interested in writing the story, could you PLEASE put some sentences to explain how you had seen the end of it in your head. I would be very glad, HAPPY about it !!!!!
Thank you for your wonderful story !
A french mommy and reader,
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
Thank you for your wonderful story !
A french mommy and reader,
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved this chapter! As the saying goes: good things comes to those that wait. Although it is most definately worth waiting for, please don't keep us waiting for too long - I await the next chapter(s) with great anticipation!!!!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! I found your story very, very good. The thoughts are so very well described, and tasting mmmmm !!!!!!!
When I saw you've updated in January, I was so glad. Yet I hope that you will continue : nothing for the moment, but I wait with all my patience, I'm sure you will update some time... Good luck to manage your time (like for all of us !) and thank you for your wonderful story !
A french mother and reader,
Bon courage !
Merely Truth
When I saw you've updated in January, I was so glad. Yet I hope that you will continue : nothing for the moment, but I wait with all my patience, I'm sure you will update some time... Good luck to manage your time (like for all of us !) and thank you for your wonderful story !
A french mother and reader,
Bon courage !
Merely Truth
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! All I can say is that it was well worth the wait! Glad you have managed to get yourself settled. It really is a hellish task; trying to find a place and then to get successfully moved in! I absolutely love your fic! As ever, the quality of the writing is excellent and the plotline is truly superb. I eagerly await the next installment - keep it up!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!!!!!!! Just a fantastic piece of writing!!!!!!!!!! I have so many favorite parts that its hard to list them all!!!!!!!!! But here are some of the ones I love.
1. He looked ridiculous striking that I-am-taiyoukai-and-you-must-fear-me pose. She bit the inside of her lips to keep her laughter in. She forgot why she wanted to yell at him and his poor little singed ear.
2. Sesshoumaru was enraged yet again by the impertinent miko. She would not be cowed! She had the gall to mock him! Pointing out that he’d lost his moko-moko due to her successful attack. It was insulting. If she hadn’t been so successful in her attack, he might have killed her on the spot. He forcefully reminded himself that Rin’s safety was his ultimate goal, no matter what he must endure to ensure it.
3. ‘Besides,’ he thought to himself, ‘the miko has the means to prevent human conception and pregnancy. Rin need not have children before six years have passed if I change my mind later.’ He didn’t share that thought with Kagome.
4. Sesshoumaru stopped speaking mid-sentence and, as Kagome glanced at him, she thought his eyes seemed to light up in anticipation, almost gleefully if such a thing was possible.
5. “Take her and run, dog-breath! Don’t let your bastard brother have her!”
6. Miroku looked back at Kouga, his eyebrows lowering in renewed anger. Yes, he was looking for a fight! He was going to murder the wolf here and now, not only for himself but for Inuyasha too. Gods, he never felt more empathy for his hanyou friend than he had in the last few moments since Kouga turned his eyes to Sango.
7. Why?’ he wondered. Why do women protect ‘poor Kouga’ like that? Why did Kagome use the subduing spell on Inuyasha when the wolf came around? Why did Sango suddenly defend the wolf after years of indifference? Why? What secret did the youkai have that turned every woman into his champion?
Miroku wanted that secret. He needed that secret. He wanted to use the secret on Sango so she’d look at him with those big eyes of hers that projected sympathy and something else at the wolf just now. He’d have to force the secret out of Kouga before he killed the youkai.
8. Apparently, Sesshoumaru had also checked to make sure Inuyasha had everything he needed for a proper mating, and supplied whatever was lacking. In this case, he’d left one dagger suitable for creating a barrier so that anyone inside the barrier could have privacy and be safe from interruption. How nice of him. She might have thought it romantic if she didn’t know the real reasons behind Sesshoumaru’s thoughtfulness. He was making sure no one could bother her and Inuyasha when they mated as Sesshoumaru decreed they would. The jerk.
There are others, but these I feel are some of the best. I loved this chapter a lot, its the best, full of humor and drama. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I know I'll be reading this chapter over and over. Again, your story is the greatest, thank you for it.
1. He looked ridiculous striking that I-am-taiyoukai-and-you-must-fear-me pose. She bit the inside of her lips to keep her laughter in. She forgot why she wanted to yell at him and his poor little singed ear.
2. Sesshoumaru was enraged yet again by the impertinent miko. She would not be cowed! She had the gall to mock him! Pointing out that he’d lost his moko-moko due to her successful attack. It was insulting. If she hadn’t been so successful in her attack, he might have killed her on the spot. He forcefully reminded himself that Rin’s safety was his ultimate goal, no matter what he must endure to ensure it.
3. ‘Besides,’ he thought to himself, ‘the miko has the means to prevent human conception and pregnancy. Rin need not have children before six years have passed if I change my mind later.’ He didn’t share that thought with Kagome.
4. Sesshoumaru stopped speaking mid-sentence and, as Kagome glanced at him, she thought his eyes seemed to light up in anticipation, almost gleefully if such a thing was possible.
5. “Take her and run, dog-breath! Don’t let your bastard brother have her!”
6. Miroku looked back at Kouga, his eyebrows lowering in renewed anger. Yes, he was looking for a fight! He was going to murder the wolf here and now, not only for himself but for Inuyasha too. Gods, he never felt more empathy for his hanyou friend than he had in the last few moments since Kouga turned his eyes to Sango.
7. Why?’ he wondered. Why do women protect ‘poor Kouga’ like that? Why did Kagome use the subduing spell on Inuyasha when the wolf came around? Why did Sango suddenly defend the wolf after years of indifference? Why? What secret did the youkai have that turned every woman into his champion?
Miroku wanted that secret. He needed that secret. He wanted to use the secret on Sango so she’d look at him with those big eyes of hers that projected sympathy and something else at the wolf just now. He’d have to force the secret out of Kouga before he killed the youkai.
8. Apparently, Sesshoumaru had also checked to make sure Inuyasha had everything he needed for a proper mating, and supplied whatever was lacking. In this case, he’d left one dagger suitable for creating a barrier so that anyone inside the barrier could have privacy and be safe from interruption. How nice of him. She might have thought it romantic if she didn’t know the real reasons behind Sesshoumaru’s thoughtfulness. He was making sure no one could bother her and Inuyasha when they mated as Sesshoumaru decreed they would. The jerk.
There are others, but these I feel are some of the best. I loved this chapter a lot, its the best, full of humor and drama. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I know I'll be reading this chapter over and over. Again, your story is the greatest, thank you for it.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a very good lemon especially since they were both virgins. Totally hot. Keep writing and try not to repeat so much; going into long explanations, other then that ur doing fine.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful...Both tenderly realistic, and indescribably sweet ^_^
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAYOOOOO!!!!!!! I'm an InuKag lemon FAN!!!!!!!! (or just regular story fan)!!! Please do not think I am a pervert like Miroku....trust me no one could go that far. Anyway, great story. I personaly liked chapter 15. *wink* *wink*. Ok yeah, that was a Miroku moment. (ewwww)Hey do you think you could make a sequel to this? If you can...PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!! INUKAG FOREVER!!!!!!!