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Well it's been 19 days since you updated and said you would in 14 days sorry to be a update bugger but I love this story and I'm ready for a lemon grrr update soon please or I'll keep counting the days past updation

loves arry

they need to stop playing games they want each othet let them have each other
update soon also kagomes relationship with shippo is super cute

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

i liked it alot are you gonna whrite more?????????

Can't wait for more... Constructive critism: Either everythings going screwy when it uploads, or your grammer/spelling sucks. And what's with the missing words? Got particularily worse in the later chapters. But anyway, love the story.

Well, all I have to say is at least you're updating now... yayness. Is there going to be a lemon in the next chapter, I hope so, or at least a lime. I think its cool that she's going to go back and hunt shards, this should be interesting, for Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru hate each other and Inu Yasha might challenge him or something like that. Well, can't wait fo the next chapter and keep up the good work^__^!!!

Although I like the premise of the fic, there are a few things that have been bothering me about it. There are a large number of spelling mistakes, such as repeatedly calling Sango “Sang” and “bough” in stead of “brought”. There are some places where the wording is rather confusing, such as when Sesshoumaru asks Kagome if she is “angry”. The tense changes way too often. There are times where it seems like you’re trying to write in present or future tense, but after a few sentences you switch back to past. People don’t usually speak in past tense when referring to the present, for example when Shippo tells Rin that she “talked funny”. If you get someone to beta-read the fic before you post any of the chapters I believe that it will make it considerably better and probably gain more readers. =) If you would like I can beta for you, just send me an e-mail.

Please continue your story its great.

I will be honest. I hate Sess/Kag. But this is different. I like it.

I'm really liking this story. I hope next chapter there will at least be another juicy lime^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!