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for Foolish Games

by LadyKurama86

person Amanda
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is amazing!!!!!!!its has just the right amount of romance and lust and totally takes me to a different world when i read it!!!!!plaese right more soon!!!!!!!
your fan Amanda!
person jingko
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow chapter 9 is really good, thanks for the update of your story. looks forwad to the next one.
person Subaru
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, so you please update as soon as possible!! Please!!
person animegirl93
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update this story is getting intresting don't stop.5 star story
person Tamiko
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm I haven't reviewed for you're story but I read all 8 chapters and I have to say that it is pretty good. The only thing that was kind of annoying was the grammar. You had good grammar but there was mistakes in some. I really do like you're story though and I wanted to ask if you could e-mail me when you update. Thank you and have a wonder time writting this story.
person kitty cat
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story i hope u right more!!!!!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Kagome
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is really great story but cut out the sweetie stuff or just don't put it as much and the mama thing to i am not shallow ,but please people are starting to say to much sweeties and mamas they sent me to tell or write this we really do love your story I have read it 4 times already i want to read your next chapter you are a fantastice writer even when others don'y think so can't wait to read more.
person Karen
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story I have read it like three times I would read it more If it wasn't for my mother telling me to get of the computer I want to see want to see what happens I want to see MINDBLOWING HARDCORE EXTRA EXRTA EXTRA HARD SEX SCENES MAKE IT GOOD WITH LOTS OF CLIMAXES make it soon and HARCORE. LOVE YA KAREN
person Anna
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRY PLEASE THESE ARE SO FREAKING GOOD!!!!!!!!


your loving fan,
Anna