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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start! Keep going!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The 1st chapter is OK but the 2nd is all run together and REALLY hard to read, so if you could fix it so it has paragraphs that would be great. Have no idea if it was an upload error or not but spaces would be good. Haven't really read them yet, I wanted to save both chapters to Word to read when I go offline shortly.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the prologue. Very interested to see where you go with this. Looks to be very interesting!! 0,0’ I will definitely read more of what you come up with!!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so Naraku killed kagome and now has Sango as a sex slave. Inuyasha you better find Sagno before to long