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for Dealings of the Heart

by InuTai

person yukiko
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more write more or I'll go crazy
person ichie-chan(too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good! update when you can!
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not trying to flame you or anything but don't you think it's high time to let something happen between inuyasha and kouga. I mean 7 chapters and still there's no indication of any lemon or anything. Even just a kiss or a small fluff would do. it's getting somewhat boring don't you think. A little playful lemon would do. Please there are too many interupptions in the story that's getting between inuyasha and kouga. so please please let something happen between the two. Anyway this chapter was great with Shippo coming in and all. But inyasha and kouga needs to develop their bond too.

Hope the next chpater's up too....
person ahanchan
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update again soon please1
person Atropa
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the twists and turns in the story... oh, well... time to head back to work...
I would rather hang around here on the AFF instead.... Man I'm such a lazy ass :)
person Rawben
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whos the spy? ... sango? have you introduced her yet? i can't remember... anyhow.. yey for updates!!!
person xangelsarah
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update i love your story!!!
-sarah
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic. I think you've done a nice job in plotting out the storyline, but I'm anxious to see Inu and Koga's relationship develop futher. There has been miminal interaction between them and I'm feeling a bit starved for my Inu/Koga fix, LOL. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Congrats on another well written chappie ^_^
person yukiko
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make sure they mate soon !! lol, and that Inu yasha is the one taking care of Shippou too, i love that kids
person ahanchan
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update soon! Bummer about yur computer situation, but good luck!