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for The Gift

by chevonne

person OMG
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant believe u just left it at the good part i mean that story is great write more really soon and post them i cant waite to see what inuyasha has in store for kagome please please please hurry and update
person CJ
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you are quick with updating. This could be an really good story. When is Miroku going to come in for Sango? Can't wait to see that and how Kagome is around Hobo after what Inuyasha did to her. I can just see her kissing Hojo but opening her eyes and seeing Inuyasha. Great work and i can't wait for more.
person ImNotLost!!
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVILY CLIFFY!, I LOVE IT , UPDATE SOON!
person kisda
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god u so need to make more to this!
person sublimetrickster
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. That was pretty hot. I like the subtle sugestion of more to come as well as a look into their past relationship together. I can't wait to read more.
person read it before
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a repost because I read it a while back but you never updated it. Are you going to update it this time? I hope so....
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh hell what a b-day present!! (crosses legs) That was HOT HOT HOT!!! Love your writing style!! Please continue on with this.. Boo !! Guess who??