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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really getting interesting hope you write more and UPDATE really soon cant waite to see what you have in store for them in this 'club' lol
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good! i love the plot, but the format makes it a bit difficult to read... you should have someone check it. there should be more commas, and stuff... but i'm excited about the next chapter!!!! post soon!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Can't wait for the next Chapter!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far and the descriptions are nice and vivid so keep it up and just continue with it.
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning of the story. very interested to see how Sesshoumaru reacts. a couple grammer mistakes but nothing bad. keep it up, wonderful story!!!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story but DAMN there are alot of spelling errors. try to work on those