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for Dystopian Story of Lovers

by Murasaki

person DarkMystic
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, please email me when you update the next chapter. The most I can say is that I love your story, because I sat up all night lol. Anyways email me please! Thank you, and update soon.
person Lizzy
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. it's different and somewhat original :)
I love the "single spark" site. one of the best out there, in my honest opinion.
Anyway, will there be lemons? Wasn't sure if you had that as a warning, but I'd love to read one, or two , or several ;). You're a talented writer.
<3 Lizzy
person ehu
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm incredibly intrigued about this story! it actually has a story line! even though there were no sweaty/steamy great...*wink wink nudge nudge* (you know what i mean! *laughs*) i still enjoyed it and i will continue to wait for the next installment! happy writing and i hope to see something soon!
person mikki
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!! Just as good as ala your other ones!!! Update soon! :)
person nightmareofcat
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovin the story so far please update soon.

and if there is anyway you could let me know when you update id appreciate it if not no big deal.
person Galadrihm_Star
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This is gettin good! Please update soon, I BEG of you!!!!!!!
person Yana
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story
person awaitingmymate
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Murasaki K-

I like your opening very much. Do hope you will continue, and update frequently!
person bunnybop102
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ilike it but what's up with kagome eye color. I'lllet it pass butwill he really meet her in death or will she be reinacrnated (his wife kameko, I think was her name oh),I hope not I hate competing for Sesshoumaru affections and love. Anyway post chap two or else.
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eee! i love it! can't wait for the next chapter. so this identity crisis you're talking about...is Kagome Kameko's reincarnation, or does she just happen to have Kameko's scent? I guess you'll explain in the next chappie...i'll wait.

Have fun!