rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. I like it a lot. Its been a while since you updated. But if there is something going on in youre life, I really hope youre okay and I hope you finish whatever you need to before you update this story.

Update as soon as you can. And I will love you fo-EVAH. :)

Update soon, dear. I think I'm addicted to this story. :)

Good story. Your character development is so rich, and I like how you are developing your plot slowly enough that we can follow it easily. Keep up the good work; I look forward to your updates.

"Was all this building pressure evident only to her? Affecting only her?"

Uh, no! It's killing ME! I thought the last chapter had it bad, but this one was worse! ^_^ Building tension is such a delicate process and you have it down, unquestionably. I liked the indepth look into not only Inuyasha and Kagome's inner struggles, but Miroku's as well (I am still very happy that both he and Sango are being written as three-dimensional characters). I think there was only one sentence I saw that was a little hinky (and, more likely than not, I just read it wrong), but it didn't in any way distract from the overall flow and purpose of this chapter.

And, don't worry about your citrus! You did a splendid job with it in "Waiting..." and I'm sure you will do well again! Just take your time -we'll all still be here.

*dies slowly with anticipation* ^_~

I love this story.
I wish that I could write like this, but sadly, I am limited to appreciation.
All the characters seem so very real, with multiple facets to their personalities. The plot and execution are brilliant, if I do say so myself. Which I shall, because I just did.
I eagerly await all of your updates, because this story is so engrossing.
It definitely sucked me right in.

Yes, another chappie! - and a good one at that :o) Things are progressing nicely both for the Inu/Kag pair and for Miroku (can't wait to see what is in store for our favourite monk). When are we going to get some hints to the mysteries of Kagome's past and the background story of the Sachi residents?

woohoo! you finally posted another chapter!!

btw, I don't know what you're talking about with POV trouble, lol, that chapter came out great in my honest opinion...

The only critique is that you need to get your muse in gear! I can't keep waiting like this for all of your chapters! I already have grey hairs and everything!!

anyways, keep on doing what you're doing, because it's awesome!

::smacks forehead:: almost forgot!! I loved the game interaction between Miroku and Sango...interesting development, especially toward their future relationship....and yes, I admit I'm feeling very smug that Sango-chan beat Miroku ^_^ Great job, over all ^_~

I am glad that you have updated. I guess the Kagome's past is going to start to make an entrance. Great filler. Update soon

Wonderfully penned--er--typed ^_^ As usual!! Was well worth the wait, and am very much looking forward to your next update ^_^