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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* That was fan-freakin'-tastic! My favorite part? When Kagome storms to her room and slams the door shut...and then opens it to slam it shut again. Not that I haven't been holding my breath for quite some time now waiting for them to do...well, SOMETHING, but I'm highly amused by the little things (the plottings of Miroku and Shippou invariably send me into fits of giggles). And now that Inuyasha seems to be in denial about the whole thing, the anticipation will be even worse! Ah, well, I suppose I have it in me to be patient.
I understand and sympathize with your anxiety about not getting certain things to "feel" right to you in your stories; and I know that no amount of anyone telling you that your pacing and delicately intricate plot are excellent will lessen that anxiety. However, whether it takes you three weeks or three months to write these tantalizing chapters, I've throughly -and enviously ^_~- enjoyed them.
I understand and sympathize with your anxiety about not getting certain things to "feel" right to you in your stories; and I know that no amount of anyone telling you that your pacing and delicately intricate plot are excellent will lessen that anxiety. However, whether it takes you three weeks or three months to write these tantalizing chapters, I've throughly -and enviously ^_~- enjoyed them.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy day's you updated! Great update...oh they were so close. Awww the angsty torture. Look forward til your next chapter.
Chanda
Chanda
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It sure takes alot of will power to resist! how does Inu-chan do it?!
I wanna know extremely soon so please update faster! X3
i waited for a new chapter for months..please dont make me wait that long again ;_;
conclusion is your a great writer and i wish to read for asap!
I wanna know extremely soon so please update faster! X3
i waited for a new chapter for months..please dont make me wait that long again ;_;
conclusion is your a great writer and i wish to read for asap!
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! You updated!!! I was begining to think you'd abandoned this fan-tabulous little fic...glad you didn't!! Very nice; the tension is so thick! Descriptions were delectable, as usual....and hopefully, more about the Inu-tachi will be learned in time--especially the past. Please update really soon!!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just lovely. that was a great first kiss. Sweet, and sexy, and funny. I liked the pace of the physical description, and wording was just...spot on. All that rewriting paid off, IMO! It just gave me little happy shivers and I'm smiling like an idiot and enjoying the heck out of the whole thing. Along with desperately hoping for more, of course! Sigh...I do so admire the ability to work until you get it just write. It's taking a while to get where the story's going, but in the best possible way. The type of story where I know I'll be happy to know the ending when it comes, but terribly sad that it's actually over!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! This chapter was worth waiting for! It looks like Kagome might be close to finally getting some of her memories back. I'm really excited to find out what happened to her. Plus I LOVED the "first kiss scene", with Inu fighting but eventually giving over to the feelings he has for Kagome. I can't wait to see how he going to try to deal with what happened between them, or more importantly, how he eventually won't be able to keep away from her now! Anyway, again, awesome chapter! Can't wait till the next! ^_^
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story. I've been waiting for you to continue. I thought you died. I wanted to cry. I've never reviewed this story but I've been following... and waiting.. a long... long time. It just took way... WAAAAAYYYY to long that I couldn't take it anymore. So I'm reviewing in hopes that you might update fast. I'm so happy you came back to us. Update soon. Please...... I'll be waiting.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That couldn't possibly be anymore perfect. Don't change it at all. Damn that was intense. I'm glad you updated! Please update soon
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really REALLY love this story. I'm looking forward to more as soon as you can get it out.. and god DAMN that was a hot kiss!! My husband would be getting mauled tonight if he weren't sick as a dog with a 101.5 fever...
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That is.. ok, that is one of the best AUs I've ever read, and I've read quite a few. It looks like it's been some time since you updated but I hope you can update again sometime soon, I've really enjoyed it. The writing is supurbe and the plot is wonderful! And all these mysteries! I so want to find out what's going on!
Wether you're still working on it or not, I'd just like to say how much I;ve loved this. It's great!
Wether you're still working on it or not, I'd just like to say how much I;ve loved this. It's great!