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Wow... I have finished reading what is here. It is very good. I hope you update again and keep working on it. This story deserves to be finished.

Please keep writing! This is one of the fanfics that I check weekly, and I get so disapointed when there's no updates. I love Sachi, and would like to have you see it to its end. Thanks.

wow i really want you to update soon its such a wonderful story!! i cant wait to see what happens...
you have the talent of pulling the reader into the story and making the situation vivid and emotional.. i love your story its one of the few i really enjoyed here.

I <3 you. This story is amazing. I keep checking back every week, but to no avail! There hasn't been more updates! *sob* Please, please continue this story. It is one of the few well written, mature Inu/Kag fanfics on the site. I adore it. I recommended it to a friend of mine too, and she says she loves it. If you're getting flames at all, just ignore them. People don't realize good writing when they read it.
A personal pet peeve of mine is when the authors blatantly take the characters out of character, and make them new people. I really like how you used the actual characters, and made their reactions to the situations similiar to how the would react if Rumiko Takahashi wrote it.
Another thing, I think you might want to actually consider writing an original story. Your writing style is unique and flowing, and the way you describe everything is superb, absolutely flawless.
Happy Writing!
Cassie

Great story with a good interst level and very very good wording that keeps me coming back to check for updates.

Thanks for a great read!


Halo_666x

Just wanted to say that you're one of my favourite authors and I really enjoy all your stories!!I really like the focus on the inner life of the characters in this one and the rather unusual setting for an AU (i really appreciate that it's not a high school/college etc...tho I do of course also like some of those;-)I'm sure many people have already said this but ur really one of the few really sophisticated writers around and i am usually left dying for another chapter...especially since ur reeally drawing out the (sexual) tension is this story...I am also increasingly curious to find out what happened to Kags...sooo (and I am really repressing the urge to shamelessly beg and pester you but) I do hope u will manage to update soon!!!

Wow! I've not stopped reading this story since I began it earlier yesterday afternoon! Oh why did you have to stop there? Man what a kiss *whew* but then Inuyasha has just got to go and act up again. I doubt he's gonna be able to resist Kagome as easily as he's thinking he will. They're gonna kiss again, i just know it.
I'm trying to figure out this deep plot you've got going on here and for the life of me I can't figure it out. One of the reasons I'll be coming back to check this story often, so update soon!

This chapter was awesome. I just happened to find this story again on accident, but I must say it was worth the wait. You do a fantastic job with giving the text an actual tone and mood beyond what is normally seen. Great job, I hope to see an update soon again!

Great chapter. It was HOT of course, but at the same time funny and emotional. I loved the end where Inuyasha ran like a scared little rabbit to keep from doing what he had just said he wouldn't do again. It was so CUTE! And I hope Kagome sees that "the gentleman doth protest too much." He's stubborn as a mule, but it looks like she's beginning to see through his bluff. I can't wait for the day when Kagome doesn't let him retreat! LOL

now this is some thrill ride... the emotional rollercoaster!! that kiss was hotter than most lemons, the wicked exhilaration of the pilfered kiss.

this is intelligent, entertaining, captivating, intreiging, eloquently written... and the list goes on (abbreviated for lack of time).

eagerly anticipating future installments!

thank you,
ginny