rate_review Reviews

I think this story is great! You haven't messed it up at all. I really hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next! Just remember we're always our own worst critics try not to worry so much about messing up the story. Your writing is great!

please update SOON!!
i love the way you write
and now i absolutly need
to know what happens next
lol...
i lok foward to chapter 15
:)

Would have liked to e-mail the author but the address is hidden so this is my way of getting a message through. Please do not abandon either of the two Inuyasha stories. They are among the best I have read, and at my age I am almost impossible to please. I have been waiting impatiently for updates and thought you had given up on both as many writers do once life gets in the way. Would be a terrible shame since both are that good. The concepts are original, the writing itself is imaginative and keeps you moving. You don't bog down the stories with endless descriptions of clothing or surroundings, the characters sound intelligent and their motivations make sense, and best of all.... the sexual interactions take a back seat to the story. Somehow you have managed to keep them from being a rehash of every other story out there, and the intensity of them is more gripping than the actual physical mechanics. KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!

OK. I'm hooked. This is great. I love your wonderful prose. Please keep posting regularly or I'll go insane.

Hugs and Kisses
Ai

::cries happily:: I had just about given up!!!!! Thrilled and enthralled that you've updated. ^_^ I hope to see more very soon!!! I'd hate for such a lovely story with true-to-character depictions go unfinished (that would be just cruel)....Hope to read more!!!

*does crazy happy dance!!*

It's so weird. I just re-read this last night, lamenting the fact that you hadn't updated in such a long time...and now, I'm just so tickled to have read a new (long!) chapter that I can't even remember what I wanted to say.

This is starting out to be the best week ever! Glad to see you're still kickin' (and writing!).

I am not complaining about the chapter... I honestly thought that you were taking a break and working on your other story, which saddened me. Because, I truly love this story a lot. So, the ghosts of Sachi strike again. Too, cool! At least their leading our confused couple in the right path, so to speak, to be locked up in an attic with Inu, I wouldn’t complain one bit.

The last part of your chapter threw me for a loop, with the kids. Souta? Rin? and K? I wonder who that one is?

I will patiently await your next chapter. I hope it’s not a year, but if it is, hell, I'll still review. :)

Chanda

your story was recommended to me so i read it, loved it, cursed when i realized i was at the last chapter, then cursed some more when i saw it hasn't been updated in almost a year. damn!!! it's really good and i hope you get the chance to continue it soon before i forget to keep checking for updates! your characterizations are awesome and the tension between them in that last chapter was fantastic. you have the perfect balance between moving just fast enough to keep me interested and just slow enough to keep me frustrated and wanting more. it's a great story and i love it!

Oh my.
I do believe, that I have fallen head over heels for this story. I do love the way you write, the style, and I like the way you portray Inu. Bleh, I like the way you portray everyone and everything! The whole concept is nice, and those flashbacks work and yeah. I might as well stop blabbing now.

Hoping for an update soon-ish,
soffi

please please please continue the story!! it's so good! please!!