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November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey Quill! I just realized I never reviewed waaaaaayyyy back when you updated last for the Christmas present/chapter. So sorry! I hope you've gotten lots of reviews to keep you going this year. Yes, I have been checking often this whole time waiting patiently for your next awesome chapter... Quite often.....
As for a review, I don't really have much to criticize besides a few spelling/minor grammatical errors, but it feels more like a forgotten word or letters when they pop up. You really do a great job editing stuff like that. I can't remember if you use a beta or not, but either way it's great stuff. I'm pretty snotty when it comes to editing mistakes. I hate catching them because it completely distracts me, even if just for a second, which takes me away from the story. However, the few that show up in your chapters don't really matter because they are so minor and... I love this story so much it doesn't irk me lol.
I also wanted to compliment your use of imagery. Your writing style kicks butt and when it comes to something like the goriness of Kikyo's murder scene, I really appreciate the details. The flashbacks were a little confusing only in that they weren't labelled *flashback**end flashback* but I think it flows better with the scenes that way. It feels more like Inuyasha's immediate thoughts, regardless of past or present, that way and flows well. I can't remember if I said this in one of my earlier reviews, but I love the way you describe emotions like terror, amusement, or tension. Everything is both palpable and truly felt. As a reader, I get caught up in them and totally empathize, as if I were the one in this stressful situation. I hope Kagome tells Inuyasha about the dreams and things she's been remembering soon. I feel like something big is about to happen and it's killing me. I have so many questions and Kagome's sketchy memory is driving me crazy. I'm assuming that's your goal and if so, good job lol. Sorry for the long review. I re-read Sachi AGAIN to give you the review I should have the last time you updated. Not that re-reading this was an issue, because I've already done so several times, but I wanted to refresh my memory to give you an adequate response. Again, sorry for the lengthiness of my review/rambling/expression-of-love. I'm hoping that this warms your heart enough to release the next chapter for another early Christmas present. To speak even more plainly: waiting this long has been very painful and I severely pout when I see you still haven't updated yet. It makes me sad :( lol. Please, PLEASE end my pain and make the next chapter worth the wait!! XOXO (^_^)
As for a review, I don't really have much to criticize besides a few spelling/minor grammatical errors, but it feels more like a forgotten word or letters when they pop up. You really do a great job editing stuff like that. I can't remember if you use a beta or not, but either way it's great stuff. I'm pretty snotty when it comes to editing mistakes. I hate catching them because it completely distracts me, even if just for a second, which takes me away from the story. However, the few that show up in your chapters don't really matter because they are so minor and... I love this story so much it doesn't irk me lol.
I also wanted to compliment your use of imagery. Your writing style kicks butt and when it comes to something like the goriness of Kikyo's murder scene, I really appreciate the details. The flashbacks were a little confusing only in that they weren't labelled *flashback**end flashback* but I think it flows better with the scenes that way. It feels more like Inuyasha's immediate thoughts, regardless of past or present, that way and flows well. I can't remember if I said this in one of my earlier reviews, but I love the way you describe emotions like terror, amusement, or tension. Everything is both palpable and truly felt. As a reader, I get caught up in them and totally empathize, as if I were the one in this stressful situation. I hope Kagome tells Inuyasha about the dreams and things she's been remembering soon. I feel like something big is about to happen and it's killing me. I have so many questions and Kagome's sketchy memory is driving me crazy. I'm assuming that's your goal and if so, good job lol. Sorry for the long review. I re-read Sachi AGAIN to give you the review I should have the last time you updated. Not that re-reading this was an issue, because I've already done so several times, but I wanted to refresh my memory to give you an adequate response. Again, sorry for the lengthiness of my review/rambling/expression-of-love. I'm hoping that this warms your heart enough to release the next chapter for another early Christmas present. To speak even more plainly: waiting this long has been very painful and I severely pout when I see you still haven't updated yet. It makes me sad :( lol. Please, PLEASE end my pain and make the next chapter worth the wait!! XOXO (^_^)
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beloved Quillwing, Have you stopped writing? I've checked both stories you've been working on and there's nothing new. Please let me know.
Rowdy
Rowdy
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January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THANK YOU! Yay! new chapter, I hope you have more in line for us. Isn't it funny? I was so busy working on my bachelors having a baby and getting my gallbladder removed and then one day I thought, "Hey let me see if there's a new chapter for Sachi" I came to look and you had posted the last chapter a day before. I loved that Inu was, FINALLY, honest with Kagome, but I gotta admit you have me (and I think I speak for a lot of us) in the edge of my seat waiting for these two to finally finish what they started so many times. I re-read the Perpetual Check chapter as requested and loved it all over again. I hope you keep writing, I love love love this story :)
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December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this just gets more and more interesting. so, was kags betrayed or is she bait laid out to snag our fave Hanyo. can't wait for more. ^^
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, I just read your amazing story. AGAIN. *sighs forlornly* COME BACK QUILL!!! It hurts my heart that you haven't updated in so long! *sniffles* BUUUT, I totally understand school and life getting in the way and having an ultimate stumbling block when it comes to writing. I'm sort of in that boat, too. Sachi is so awesome, please update soon! PLEASE!
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an AMAZING story you HAVE to continue it!!! I agree with other reviewers here, you've ruined me for other Inuyasha fics on this site because yours is SO good! The time, thought and care you put into writing this is obvious! Please continue!!! I love this story!!!
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November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just dropped by to see if maybe a new chap was up. I truly love this story and REALLY, REALLY hope you continue it! There are so few quality Inuyasha fan-fics left out there, your Sachi is definitely my favorite! Every time I'm on the website I've got to check your fic and half the time end up re-reading all the chapters all over again, LOL... I hope everything's okay with you and that you haven't given up on this awesomely amazing story! Please, Please, Please! Looking forward to your next chapter!
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I just saw a new chapter! I must say this, you have ruined me! I can no longer read any other fanfics with interest b/c none are as good as Sachi!! You have set a high standardthat no other fic has been able to match. Please.... keep up the good work and pleeeeease keep them coming!!
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I very RARELY review fics. I am quite a picky reader. I need to be honest, this is the best fan fic I have ever read and I have read A LOT of fics. I really can't wait to see more and I will diligently wait for another update. I check every few months for one.
Thanks for the great fic and I look forward to more. Keep up the great work.
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
Thanks for the great fic and I look forward to more. Keep up the great work.
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just recently came across your story and I love it! I like the whole idea of the Sachi w/ it's history and possible influence. I'm enjoying the tension b/w Inu/Kags and definitely look forward to their future lemony-limes. I'm intrigued by Sango and her career (hott lemon w/ Miroku, btw!).
I'm excited with how your story is unfolding and can't wait to see what happens next. The part when that creepy thing was in the forest while Kagome stood in the kitchen frozen with fear was so cool. I had chills. I hope there are more thrilling scenes coming up! The suspense of Kagome's amnesia is driving me crazy. I hope she starts remembering more. Hopefully Kagome doesn't do something crazy with this Kikyo eye-opener, like run away.
I LOVE what you've done w/ Shippo! I just love his character. So many times he's just an annoying little brat, but here you have him as the little genius that loves getting into trouble and capture his mischievousness oh so well. The sticky rice glue scene was hysterical! I loved how after that, they said he wouldn't be too far away since foxes love to watch their plots unfold and he was badly disguised as a tree up in a tree, lol.
I was so into your story that when I hit the end of your latest chp 17 and couldn't go any further, I wailed "NoOoOo!!!" Seriously. Reading your A/N's gives the impression that your updates don't come that often and that makes me sad. Lol. I'd love to see chp 18 come quickly lol.
I'm excited with how your story is unfolding and can't wait to see what happens next. The part when that creepy thing was in the forest while Kagome stood in the kitchen frozen with fear was so cool. I had chills. I hope there are more thrilling scenes coming up! The suspense of Kagome's amnesia is driving me crazy. I hope she starts remembering more. Hopefully Kagome doesn't do something crazy with this Kikyo eye-opener, like run away.
I LOVE what you've done w/ Shippo! I just love his character. So many times he's just an annoying little brat, but here you have him as the little genius that loves getting into trouble and capture his mischievousness oh so well. The sticky rice glue scene was hysterical! I loved how after that, they said he wouldn't be too far away since foxes love to watch their plots unfold and he was badly disguised as a tree up in a tree, lol.
I was so into your story that when I hit the end of your latest chp 17 and couldn't go any further, I wailed "NoOoOo!!!" Seriously. Reading your A/N's gives the impression that your updates don't come that often and that makes me sad. Lol. I'd love to see chp 18 come quickly lol.