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by Quillwing717

person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My Kami!!! Brillant!! Another prefect chapter!! Chapter three - very good... I really am enjoying your story a whole lot!! I have my fingers crossed that this will be a fairly long story. Will you go the way of having Kagome's memories come back slowly one by one or will it be this huge tsunami when the floodgates open? My choice would be slowly - just because it would get the story to lengthen. Please keep up the excellent work!! Update when you can...
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww!! that was so good!!! i can't wait for an update!! and is kikyo still alive??
person RaptorChicky
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm really enjoying this story of yours so far. The first chapter had me intreged, but the 2nd is what truely reeled me in--you have such a colorful way with words! It really fills the story out and helps the reader picture what's going on. Keep it up!
person topaz
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is wellon its way to being a graet ,wonderfully awsome,veryy veryy delicios fic!! keep it up!! will be watching for upodates! love it!!
person drake220
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done!! i like this story very much!! it's progressing nicely and inu/kag's reactions are descriptively lovely!
person fallenangel7583
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great addition to the story. wow...poor Kagome. you really managed to capture her dispare pretty well. i mean, looking in the mirror and not knowing yourself is deep...really deep. very well done. i love the one liners as well. you have a good grasp on your characters and a very intresting plot that you are stringing together nicely. i also am very curious as to just 'who' left inu in charge. i'm putting my bids down on Sesshoumaru, which makes inu's line a HELL of a lot funnier. man, i laughed out loud on that one. great job!!
person Serena63083
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have stopped going to FF.net and found this story, it is wonderful!!! don't stop writing!
person littleolmee
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, i just love a good mystery!! can't wait to see where you take us with this.
person kiwichan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story! I haven't seen this type of plot taken with an Inuyasha story, and I am eagar to read more! I think I am really going to like how Kagome is portrayed with no memory, and though I have read a few before where one group member or another has lost their memory, this one is definatly fresh and exciting! I am definatly curious to find out what Kagome was running from...if anyone.....and how she ended up in the river with a gun-shot wound to her head. And just who exactly the mysterious person that so closely resembels her.....And what exactly is her (the mysterious women) relationship from the past, with Inuyasha? Yes I am very very eager for more.....!
person inu hanyou Nikkie
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story... flows very smoothy. Very good plot so far... I'm eager to read more..I'm enjoying it... Kagome losing her memory.. that is a new twist I haven't come across yet... And Inu a Inn owner!!! LOL... Mr Anti-Social owning an Inn... That is very kawaii.. Please keep up the good work... I am finding it very hard these days to come across good writers of Inu/Kag Mir/San stories... they seemed to be drying up and being replaced by Kagome haters... I am a big believer of Rumiko's pairings... You definitely have the workings of a great story here and it isn't one of the "Happy Meal" stories that are being chucked out like fast food... Your story has the makings of a full flavoured seven course meal... Kudos to you and many Arigato's.. for being a breath of fresh air!!!! Now inu hanyou Nikkie will preform her trick: she gets onto her hind legs, front paws clasped together, and promptly whimpers out a "please update when you can"