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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
new chapter! joy! i loved the sexual tension in this. it was subtle but potnent. nicely done.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word.... AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE**
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just checked to see if I reviewed this one already, but I didn't, so now I will.
KICK ASS!!!!!
Not only is the plot good, but you can SPELL! Never underestimate the power of proper English. Some people with good plots cannot spell worth a damn and their story sucks as a result.
Ooh, I got distracted.
But anyway, keep on keeping on, and update as soon as possible, so I can read it!
Good job
KICK ASS!!!!!
Not only is the plot good, but you can SPELL! Never underestimate the power of proper English. Some people with good plots cannot spell worth a damn and their story sucks as a result.
Ooh, I got distracted.
But anyway, keep on keeping on, and update as soon as possible, so I can read it!
Good job
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully fresh take on Inuyasha! I love it! Having Kagome lose her memory creates so many questions that will definitely keep me reading. It's so hard sometimes, to sort through all the stories out there and find one that makes you want to keep reading after the first chapter. Great so far! Can't wait to read more.
Oh, and that arguement about the rags and Miroku's comment had me cracking up. I like Kagome's character in this (sometimes people make her so damsel in distressish (not a word, I know ^_^) that it makes me sick. Love seeing her spine straighten and her chin lift!
Oh, and that arguement about the rags and Miroku's comment had me cracking up. I like Kagome's character in this (sometimes people make her so damsel in distressish (not a word, I know ^_^) that it makes me sick. Love seeing her spine straighten and her chin lift!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one the best stories that I have read yet. I hope that you update soon so that the
story of Inuyashas past will become more clear. Please dont stop writimg this story.
It has a really good plot and I wan to know how you would end it. I also lke that you write
long chapters with lots of detail. The detail isn't boring like some stories so keep up the
good work!!!!!!!!
story of Inuyashas past will become more clear. Please dont stop writimg this story.
It has a really good plot and I wan to know how you would end it. I also lke that you write
long chapters with lots of detail. The detail isn't boring like some stories so keep up the
good work!!!!!!!!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.3 is up and it was another good chapter, I like this story a lot and I hope that you stick with it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want your term papers.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This the first time that I read your fanfiction and I like how things flow. You're very descriptive in your writing and was trying to picture it in my mind. I really enjoyed reading what you have so far and hope to read some more. Are you going to introduce anymore characters as it goes on? Stupid question since we'll have to find out the mystery behind kagome. duh.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an awsome story so far. Usually I'm not a big fan of AU fics but I'm really loving this. I'm intrested in finding out why Inuyasha is so reluctant to talk about his past and what Kagome might be starting to remember. Your a great writer, keep up the excellent work! Can't wait for the next chap!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic! The mistery is fantastic and your way to describe the situations and characters feelings is exceptional. I'm biting my nails here waiting to know who she really is and what happened to sent her there. But I'm under the impression the mistery is about Inu's past too, and maby that is the conection between them.
Please, keep going and don't forget this fic, for God sake!
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere
Please, keep going and don't forget this fic, for God sake!
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere