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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW YOU'D BE BACK!!! I've had this story saved in my favorites, hoping that you would finish it. it's really good so far, with just enough wonder and suspense. Keep it coming!!!!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! ahh! is she going to lose the game?? ugh! great chapter! i'm excited for the next one! i had forgot about this story! i'll have to add it to my favs so i dont lose it again... ;)
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gosh, i was sooooo happy when i saw tjat you have updated your newest chapter, and just like the other i love it!!
i think all chara´s are soooo well described and i really like them veeery much...
ok .. so today i´m tired and won´t write much, just that it was a great chapter like always and i hope you update soon .. i know your not doing it often, but still .. i think it´s woth waitong for ^__^
bye bye
gosh, i was sooooo happy when i saw tjat you have updated your newest chapter, and just like the other i love it!!
i think all chara´s are soooo well described and i really like them veeery much...
ok .. so today i´m tired and won´t write much, just that it was a great chapter like always and i hope you update soon .. i know your not doing it often, but still .. i think it´s woth waitong for ^__^
bye bye
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! Thank you for updating! I really hope you update again soon so that we can hurry and find out about Kagome's past! oOo
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!! I'm so happy that you updated this that I can't even put into words how excited I was when I saw it! I find it absolutely amazing that you are writing two Inu fics at the same time...I'm not sure I could keep my story lines straight doing that! So, obviously, I loved the chapter. Your diaglogue is so good, and all those little remarks about what they thought of Kagome -and all the little tidbits you hint at of their pasts- is what makes me love this story. I just want to know what's going on! ^_^ The ending...kind of a cliffy...-_- So...is Kagome going to beat Miroku? She sooo is...? ^_^
As for grammar and such, I think I saw, like, two mistakes, which bothered me so little that I can't even really remember where they were (if you honestly want me to go back and check, I will...I know how it is to have the grammar/spelling ocd! ^_^). I just don't nit-pik at exceptionally well written stories.
Great chapter! Hurray for updating! ^_^ I remember when I first found this fic I was so completely enthralled with it that, when I got to the last chapter you had written, I almost couldn't stand the idea of having to wait for the next. But, if you continue to write like this, I will find it in me to be patient (no pressure ^_^)
Ok, done gushing. Looking forward to what happens next!
As for grammar and such, I think I saw, like, two mistakes, which bothered me so little that I can't even really remember where they were (if you honestly want me to go back and check, I will...I know how it is to have the grammar/spelling ocd! ^_^). I just don't nit-pik at exceptionally well written stories.
Great chapter! Hurray for updating! ^_^ I remember when I first found this fic I was so completely enthralled with it that, when I got to the last chapter you had written, I almost couldn't stand the idea of having to wait for the next. But, if you continue to write like this, I will find it in me to be patient (no pressure ^_^)
Ok, done gushing. Looking forward to what happens next!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay for updates!!! hehe. great chapter! man, why can i see Kagome whipping miroku in this game? at first i though you had a game of Mah Jong going and i woudl have been impressed, but the skill that you threw into that game, never really heard of it (but of course i know chess). very interesting. i loved how you got inu to open up to Kagome in that part. sooo...now we know that kikyo had a prior part in this. interesting. man, this mystery just keeps getting deeper. obviously there is a lot betwen miro and inu that is painful and hurts about their pasts....i can't wait to find out more. damn, this really has me on the edge of my seat. keep it up!!!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurray!! An update is exactly what i needed!! and I loved the chess game! I find that no game is as good for literary impact as chess. it's something very common but mysterious. Also, that wrist thing was great and the visual with Inuyasha in his yukata was beautiful! good choice and a great job!!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was very glad to see you start updating again. This is a wonderful original story, and I enjoy reading it very much. I goes to prove you can have a good story without relying on huge fight scenes and lemons, don't get me wrong I do like those as well, but a good plot and quality work are far more satisfying. What can I say, I like it when the characters feel like they could be real people, in the way they interact.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY for updates!! hehe, that makes me smile!! good chapter, great interacton between kagome and inu. i can't wait to see what happens between them. what happened that she can't remmeber and what happened to inu in tokyo? a business ey? interseting!!! great update adn great chapter. (btw, labor day is coming up...hehe. memorial day is in may...the two holidays are for teh same thing and yet so damn confusing!!!) thanks and keep up the great work!!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MAN, this is GREAT. I'm so glad I finally found a story I liked while I was wading through all the other crap on this site, and I can't wait for the next update. I'm falling in <3 with this. ^^