rate_review Reviews

great great great!! just as ever, one of the few inu-stories i still read .. and i love it!! i think it may be even the best!!!!
so .. they gonna kiss soon? huh .. how soon? and uhm ... how long will this story be? do you have an idea?
ps: i totally agree, kill the wirters block!!!
again wonderful chapter!

I do like this very much. Your style is very pleasant and you do seem to be building up the tension a good deal. You may want to have an actual event (like a disasterous snowstorm) to take up the time while we wait for either of our lovebirds to make a move. I sure do know about being hit by life in the head boadside, but such a plot device can keep you and others amused while you think.

the long break was fine. it was just an opportunity to reread this great story. I absolutely loved this chapter. the sexual tension and the great dialouge as well as the plot development made this a chapter well worth the wait. great job as usual!!

I was so H-A-P-P-Y to see your update! (Skips gleefully around the room)! I really like the new chapter. You described fine details so well, that I felt like I was in the room with them, when they were having hot chocolate (imagines the slow, wafting steam slowly rising from a cup of cocoa, with rich aroma). It really added to the story. The tension between InuYasha and Kagome is so dynamic with your descriptions. The only criticism I can offer is that I saw a couple of spelling errors. (Not that moi should point anyone's mistakes but her own). I also liked the way you are writing Shippo; very similar to his anime character, but maybe a bit smarter. His conniving (spelled correctly?) is adding alot to the InuYasha/Kagome angst. I think you should keep it in the plot line. Ditto those thoughts about Shippo in regards to Miroku. They make good partners in crime/LOL. I have a feeling that Sango will join this crew at some point. We all know that Miroku has to grope someone, and InuYasha is not going to share Kagome. That makes for good story telling! Keep up the wonderful work and I hope we read you soon. Cynbad146

Hi! I must say that I really like your story. It certainly is different than others that have taken place in modern times with the characters that we love. You have woven a little mystery into the story. Who is Kagome and were did she come from, who shot her and why. Why is it a secret about Inuyasha and Miroku's past. Who is looking for Inuyasha? Are you going to have Koga,Sango and Sesshomaru enter the picture anytime soon. Are you going to have Sango as Kagome's close friend, who has been worried and trying to find her,etc. Anyway, good story and please don't abandon it. I would like to see how things turn out.

exquisite! all I can say is that this story is beautifuly written. PLEASE update soon!

Wow! I just finished reading the whole thing. And I have to say you are an exceptional writer! You have an awesome way of describing things and how the characters are feeling. This is really good so far and it is a rarity that I find an IY fic THIS good. Lately I've been reading just RK fics but this one caught my intrest and I just had to read it. It took me a while but I finally finished. I like the fact that you have long chapters and it's very rare if I get bored or lost while reading. So I'm hoping the next update is soon. I'm hoping to see what happens with the move InuYahsa suggested for the game of shogi.

Until next update and good job!!

Nire

Hey, I have seen this story before but at first it didn't catch my attention... until now. To be honest I don't know why, cuz this story is really good. In spite of being an AU (which usually are not that good), Inu & the gang seem to be more in character, the setting. It's strange but read this story and keep thinking it's the feudal era o_O but I love it! Also the plot, as I can tell, it's very good (and intriguing). I have a slight idea the one behind Kagome's accident is Naraku, tho I can't begin to imagine why he would do that.... and I wonder if Sango would make an appereance and when it would be...
Ha! This story def is going to my recommended list! Please update soon, your story rocks!
Maggz

OOOOOO..... I beg you to please update soon! I really like this story, and am anxious for you to update. So please....please update soon.

A very interesting story! All the tantalizing little hints have me very curious about the mysterious background and where this is all going. I'm looking forward to updates and hopefully enlightenment :o)