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Great new chapter!

The imagery you create in your writing is amazing!! You can almost see the locations and feel the emotions of the characters...

If you let this story go to waste, I will hunt you down like you would do to writer's block, lol....

i love it!!! i read it all just now!!! please UPDATE as soon as u can!! i love this story soooooo much!!!!
MUCH LUV

so far I love this, the character interactions, the hint of a suble plot current and decent (though not perfect) maintaining of the real characters personality. my only problem would be the emphizing(sp?) of scent, but thats a small thing.

I really like this story and can't wait for more. Keep up the awsome job

Don't feel to bad about how long it took you to post this last chapter, it's always worth the wait! Yours is one of the few stories that when it's updated, it is that little thrill where you mentally go 'yay!'. Im' just so happy you are still writing and have not given up on it. It is one of the more unique, and of course, well written stories out there, and one of my personal favorites. I think it is that everything from the characterization, the settings, and your style work seamlessly togeather to make for a captivating read. I've always been one of those people that when I find a good novel, I read it cover to cover, even if that means staying up 'til dawn. I would do the same thing with this. Just keep writing is all I ask.

wow! great chapter. i'm still hanging in limbo though waiting for answers. i so want to know what inu's deal is and see some type of interaction between him and Kagome!!! GREAT story!!! i'd write more but i'm on budgeted time. as always, an amazing story, and i'm glad you're still working at it!!!!

wow! great chapter. i'm still hanging in limbo though waiting for answers. i so want to know what inu's deal is and see some type of interaction between him and Kagome!!! GREAT story!!! i'd write more but i'm on budgeted time. as always, an amazing story, and i'm glad you're still working at it!!!!

Ok, I very much like your story and I feel the same way about writers block. I hope that it doesn't hit you again anytime soon because I am now begging for an update.
Please (that is the most begging I ever do) SO .....i look forward to reading your new chapters soon....hopefully.

thank you lensa

...oh, the TENSION!! I LOVE it! You're soooo good at it! ^_~

I KNEW Kagome was going to beat Miroku (with the help of Inu and Shippo of course). Great chapter. I think it went pretty smoothly. I started laughing right around the part where Miroku stops giving her advice, and there were a few other parts that had me chuckling to myself. Another scene in the kitchen with tension between the two...and the magic that the first snow of the winter can bring...I sat here and read all the way through and then realized at the end, while my eyes were burning and tearing up, that I hadn't blinked in a very long time ^_^ Every new chapter makes me so curious about their past I almost can't stand it -which really shows how great of a writer you are, keeping your readers hooked on every word.

Ew, writer's block. If you ever do find it, let me know...I want to get a few kicks in myself ^_^

No worries about the time u spent away. Everyone gets writer's block, but i'm glad that you have overcome it! This chapter is your best one yet, and i won't doubt that they'll only get more intriging from here! Please update soon, til your next chappy!! take care!
lith*