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by Quillwing717

schedule November 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Omg, I'm so glad to see you back. I've been off the site for at least year or so. Last time I remember being excited about you updating was with the chp in front of the fire and Inuyasha telling Kagome everything. I feel connected to your struggles. I hope that's not creepy but, honestly, your A/N regarding your goal of completion struck a chord in me and I've been slowly plugging away at my chp ever since. My soul-sucking job has also gotten in the way of my writing. My life and, very sadly, several deaths of ppl close to me have put me into one big stumbling block. It's taken me, shit, two years(?) to get through my chapter 6. I'm in Texas and Hurricane Harvey didn't effect me personally, but my closest friend's family. It's been a hard couple of years and I've been struggling with a whole lot. I didn't intend to pour that all out as if you are Dear Abby, but I felt compelled regardless. You have definitely inspired me. Great writing, as always. The lemon was worth the wait and I look forward to the next chp. This is my favorite story on AFF.

Take care!

person Kula
schedule January 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I've been reading this story for so many years, I just came across it and relized you'd updated. I was so excited I basically put everything on hold and reread and savored he whole story again from the beginng. Thank you so much for the update, it was amazing. I'm going to be watching for your next update.

schedule August 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

schedule July 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So excited this is still going! I love it!

schedule July 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Super excited to see you back! I can't convey enough how delighted I was to see the 2017 updated date on here. I had to stop everything I was doing and see what you had written! I am personally struggling the good fight with my own story. I'm stuck in the Great Swampy Middle of it with a tedious chp that I'm trying desperately to get past, despite it being probably 2 years. Sigh. My goal is for your resolution theme to rub off on me. Keep it up! You're amazing! This is my ultimate favorite AFF story!

schedule February 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's super cool to see this story updated again.  I think this was one of the first fics that introduced me to the concept of AU/alternate universe.  Thank you for sticking with it!

Side note: I think the formatting for this latest chapter and the one before it needs some adjustment.  There are no breaks between paragraphs, making it somewhat difficult to read.

person SammyJams
schedule January 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Why did you abandon this fic?!?! Please please please finish it!!!

person bellakris
schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so good! I just finished your latest chapter and can't wait for more, more, and MORE! Keep going, hope you'll update soon!
person Adelaide
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you will ever see this comment/review, but figured it can't hurt to try. I love love LOVE this story. I haven't been able to make a guess as to where you are headed with it and I just love the mystery. You did great with keeping the characters in-character and just writing an interesting fic. I have actually been watching this fic for a long while now, just checking occasionally to see if it has been updated. I have no idea if you are still writing or check this ever, but I you do ever get this, please finish this fic!! (Or at least tell me how it ends! ;)).
person Devon
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please please finnish this story, I've been following for years, waiting patiently for updates hoping that Kagome and Inuyasha finally, FINALLY, do the deed. This is such a fabulous story in a sea of shitty stories and I hate to see it left unfinished. So please keep writing!