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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Wowwee! I love this story! Update soon!

I really like the way this story is beginning, but it is still so early on that I think I'll reserve most of my comments for a few more chapters so that I can get a good idea of where this story is going. A story with only one or two chapters is always so hard to judge. It might go in a great direction and you'll absolutely love it, or it might go in a direction you don't like as much and you lose interest. It looks VERY promising though, so I'm hoping for the best! And I really do hope that you'll update soon so I can read more. I'll keep watching for more updates! ^_^

Oho...suddenly the tension just hiked up another notch...

Wow, I'm liking it so far, and its excellent for english not being your second language, not very many mistakes I noticed.

Looking forward to future chapters!! Keep up the good work

Nice story and its so cool that you placed that Sess and Kik will get married, from how the fic is going the pairings should be Inu/Kag and Sess/Kik(please make those pairings) yes I know Sess doesn't belive in love but both Sess and Kik can fell in love with each other to the heck if she was Inu's ex he will have Kagome after all.

So please I beg you make this fic and Inu/Kag and Sess/Kik and you will make me so happy.

That first chapter was seriosly one of the best I've read. It totally drew me in and I hope that you'll update often! I really like where your heading with this and it's really ( excuse the cletie, (however that's spelt lol)) cool. Hope to read another chapter soon.

I really like this story i really hope u keep writing i'll look for another chapter of this tomarrow. I hope u write one by them

Hey, great start! Kagome must be underage then if she needs a guardian. And Inu is a lawyer? You pedophile you :)

Man! this is really good! I can't wait till you update. ^.^