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for No Smooth Path to Eros

by VeryViciousVixen

person Kagss
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I found you here too... I read your story in MMorg.com let me tell you it's a great one, I'm waiting anxiously for other chapters... it's been a long time what's taking you so long... jeje don't get me wrong here but the waiting here it's just to much... please update soon. Great story!!!
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story..im a fan of any couples with kikyo^^
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooo u must continue!!!
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well done chapter. it's funny...i really can't see Seshoumaru proposing in anything romantic other then for a casual "so wwhat do you say?" kind of thing. the pizza kind of fit him. LOL. teh whole restruant thing definatly did! LMAO> very well done! my dad proposed to my mother on a teeshirt. LOL. man...so sessh has no idea kikyo has been with inu? hmm. interesting. funny that kikyo still wants inu...sessh ain't gonna be a happy puppy!
person Michael22
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far and you are doing a great job building the characters and the plot. So keep up the good work and update soon please.
person swasdiva
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How the hell am I supposed to give you contructive criticism when there is absolutely nothing I'd change? I. Am. Completely. Hooked. This fic is nothing short of criss-crossing, misunderstood romantic brilliance. In all honesty, I have absolutely no idea who the final pairings are going to be. I am particularly a super-mega-huge Sess/Kag fan, but then you really can't go wrong with Inu/Kag, but then I've always sympathized with Kikyo, but I can't see her with anyone other than Yash. BUT, I've also just begun browsing Sess/Kik fics. ARG!!!!!!! Who the hellfire do I root for?? Do you have the pairings pre-planned? AHHH!!!!! Oh well! Regardless, this fic is utterly fabulous and superfluously addictive. Great writing, fresh style, engaging plot. Can't wait to read more!
person alix
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thankx for the promise of the lemon :)
person fallenangel7583
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...this shall indeed be a good game of cat and mouse. yay! very interesting. i like the history between inu and kikyo but something tells me it isn't what it ought to be. i know kikyo's a tramp, but we'll see what happens. i have a feeling something hasnt' been said, like most angst. soo...her and sesshiles huh? damn. can't wait to see that sessh learns he's having inu's sloppy seconds. LOL. that shall be great! poor Kag...nearly raped by hiten. that's not cool. i hope inu kicks his ass later on! go inu!!!
person ergo
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah chap 2. please put this on ff.net, too

he he, inu you pedophile. i dont think kik is right for sess, make this a sess/rin plz!