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June 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Please continue this story!!!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why have you abandoned this story? Please comeback and finish!!!! B reading U!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such an amazing story please please finish it!!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it please let me know when theres more
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:( When are you going to update I am looking forward to read the next chapter please dont make me wait too much longer.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i can't wait till an update please update asap!!!!!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot for your fic, but it needs a little work. You might want to start by adding more detail. Like, what the characters are thinking and feeling at the time. Also, avoid repetition, so your not using the same words and phrases over and over again. Also, make the timing a interesting, if everything happens on 'cue' then it might get a little too boring. All in all, your fic is great though and I'll continue reading and reviewing. Please don't look at this as a flame, just some advise (which you don't have to take you're the writer of this fic not me) that I wanted to give you. Update soon!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. im glad the kagome was able to get him out of it faster .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cts plz
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hum..well that was weird but them good... i cant wait for the next chapter so please update soon!!!