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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried the whole time. It was like you could see them saying goodbye... ;_; it was such a great piece. I think I like you lots when you're depressed, sorry if it sounds cruel.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic writing, but a sad and good story. i can't wait for a sequel.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was just plain beautiful...So lovely and beautiful!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so wonderful. I almost started to cry. To have love like that. To enjoy such passion. That is something I have yet to have to luxury of but I hope that it is as beautiful as your story. Wonderful. It is a shame it was only a one-shot but it was definitely good well it lasted. Bravo!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I absolutely loved this story. It was a little sad but it turned out good in the end. A good story for the romantic at heart.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Secondly, technically, the Tensaiga works, because it kills those little messengers of the underworld, so they can't take your soul. Therefore if your body can no longer house your soul (i.e. you're sick, and your body doesn't function properly), it won't make a difference, because the Tensaiga only prevents the soul from leaving, it can't keep it in. Or at least that's the way I interpreted it. So in a nutshell, the tensaiga doesn't work.
Except, Sesshoumaru was able to revive someone's head and later Jaken who had been slipt in half. Now, I applaud you for giving some realism to this fic. Too many writers cheapen their stories by having the human part of the pairing become immortal. However, from what we've seen of Tenseiga, it's pretty a amazing. I wouldn't doubt it could save someone who died of old age.
Except, Sesshoumaru was able to revive someone's head and later Jaken who had been slipt in half. Now, I applaud you for giving some realism to this fic. Too many writers cheapen their stories by having the human part of the pairing become immortal. However, from what we've seen of Tenseiga, it's pretty a amazing. I wouldn't doubt it could save someone who died of old age.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story......update please
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet.That made me cry.Your touching story has got to be the best ever.Holla!!!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I cried.I NEVER EVER cry. Please make a sequal.MAYBE in the future (modern era) he finds her as a reincarnation and tries to make her fall in love with him all over again and do his loving that he never gave to fudeal rin.Hey,maybe even a happy ending
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly an award winning story if I was a dog I would give it 2 paws up but since I'm only human I'll give it 2 thumbs up and 5 gold stars. That story was breath taking and I'm not being over dramatic, I cried I weeped I was thrilled dont stop writting!XD