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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an awesome story, please continue! ~Lynn
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, interesting chapter, Sesshoumaru is one brave man, most males wouldn't drop anything they worked hard to have, tee hee hee, it seems he really...does...care...*cries a waterfall* T.T He's SO COOL!!!! I wish my father was like that with my mother, but then again, their marriage was by force arrangement, she was poor and beautiful, he was rich, smart and handsome, the 'PERFECT' couple. How...patheicly stupid and old, geez, I hate it! My father wants me to marry the man he likes too, I told him off! Girl power! Hahaha, but yea, he has a lot to say to me about that too, he also doesn't want any other males from the 'other' races as he 'politely' puts it. What a load of sh* if you ask me, I got to say, Rin is lucky to NOT have parents to bug her about anything of that sort, what kind of father compares his daughters to other people's more successful and graceful daughters. I get As in all my glasses, and my worst grade this year was 2 Bs, come on now, I have to go to 2 freakin school! Geez, and he DARES compare me to other no life broads, whoa was I pissed off to no end! I didn't say anything though, it is IMPROPER for me to speak my mind, I swear he better hopes I don't get rich when I grow up, I'm going to give him a piece of my mind!
Other than that, great chapter, thanks a lot for the update, ^_^ I hope you update soon, and oh yea, sorry about the whole summer thing being cancelled, it must've been a real bummer for you. I know I would have probably spit out fire and see red, tee hee hee, wells, anyways, arigato again if you read this, and matta ne, until the next update, but I must add, I'm actually kind of happy that one of your activities was cancelled, because now you can work on this fabulous story of yours more!!! :) sorry if I sound selfishly mean, but it's true!
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Other than that, great chapter, thanks a lot for the update, ^_^ I hope you update soon, and oh yea, sorry about the whole summer thing being cancelled, it must've been a real bummer for you. I know I would have probably spit out fire and see red, tee hee hee, wells, anyways, arigato again if you read this, and matta ne, until the next update, but I must add, I'm actually kind of happy that one of your activities was cancelled, because now you can work on this fabulous story of yours more!!! :) sorry if I sound selfishly mean, but it's true!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter...so Sesshomaru found her...YEA!!!!!!!! So what is going to happen next ????? will he move in with her??? I know more trouble is on the horizon for those two be I hope you will let them have one chapter of being happy together PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also I don't know if you know, but if you want your story have a few more times on the first page....you need to go the user panel ...log on....go thur the meun until you reach edit chapter. pick a chapter and just hit ok...you don't have to edit unless you need to .....and your story will pop to the front page again. This way you can get a few more hits ...if you want to ,......keep it going.....
Also I don't know if you know, but if you want your story have a few more times on the first page....you need to go the user panel ...log on....go thur the meun until you reach edit chapter. pick a chapter and just hit ok...you don't have to edit unless you need to .....and your story will pop to the front page again. This way you can get a few more hits ...if you want to ,......keep it going.....
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo its getting better! so cute, keep writing
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update fast. I like the stroy very much and it is so unique.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!!! About time that Rin gets what's hers. I hope that kiss is the end. I hope that next chapter shows there
love for each other. What will Kag do when she finds out? Will Sess live with Rin? Will this encounter lead to something
that Rin might regret?? Update sooon girly. ^_^
love for each other. What will Kag do when she finds out? Will Sess live with Rin? Will this encounter lead to something
that Rin might regret?? Update sooon girly. ^_^
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like it so far. I am not quite getting it. Some advice I give is like don't talk to much about them. Its great don't get me wrong it is just that when you give like 3 big huge paragraphs of the ex's of Kagome it is really putting me to think the story is about her. Hey is Inuyashsa ever going to come out? Hopefully he ends up with Kagome or Kikyo I love Kik/Inu or Inu/San but Sango is already with Miroku. what ever is your story great job. I love It!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! so great!! =) i think kagome needs a good swift kick in the arse!! but that's just me.. can't wiat for the next chapter!! =)
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, Rin reminds me of me, I live for my family and never for myself, there was a time when my older sister was in love with her middle school 'best' friend. In the end he was always interested into me, she had to bare the burden of hearing him ask questions about me, and everything, I could only imagine her pain, I hated it...but I'll forever remember it, because that is one of the things in my life I will never try to do again. The thing was, I actually cared for him back that made me angry with myself, and in truth I was only in 6th grade, what did I know? Nothing, because in the end, it never worked out, I don't really mind at all, you see, I'm acutally happy it didn't, but in Rin's case, I hope it all ends well for her. Because losing a family member's love and company is hard enough, but losing the only family member you have left is worst.
I know because, my older sister was my only resolution to all my problems, but then when she abandoned me for the damned internet and chatting, I hated it all, she didn't care for me no more, she didn't even listen to me half the time. I hated it all, I wished that the internet never existed, that is probably the reason for me never going on line much, heck I don't even have a page and a screen name any more in AIM. I don't care though, I hate it, if it turns me into a person like her, never looking after my family, deserting them like that, I wish it never existed at all... I'm sorry I'm getting out of the whole situation I started out with. Anyways, it was a great chapter, I really do like this story, tee hee hee, I wanted to ask you if you ever watched or read a manga or anime called, 'Vampire Princess Miyu' I really like it. I think you might to, Larva is hot, but when he has his mask on, he looks like the grim reeper or something, tee hee hee, with his weapon too.
It's good otherwise though, anyways, continue your great work, tee hee hee, I'm still rooting for you, please continue soon, I really do look forwards to the next chapter, and hope you have a great day...tee hee hee, arigato for the update and hope you will please continue this story soon. Matta ne, until the nect update.
I know because, my older sister was my only resolution to all my problems, but then when she abandoned me for the damned internet and chatting, I hated it all, she didn't care for me no more, she didn't even listen to me half the time. I hated it all, I wished that the internet never existed, that is probably the reason for me never going on line much, heck I don't even have a page and a screen name any more in AIM. I don't care though, I hate it, if it turns me into a person like her, never looking after my family, deserting them like that, I wish it never existed at all... I'm sorry I'm getting out of the whole situation I started out with. Anyways, it was a great chapter, I really do like this story, tee hee hee, I wanted to ask you if you ever watched or read a manga or anime called, 'Vampire Princess Miyu' I really like it. I think you might to, Larva is hot, but when he has his mask on, he looks like the grim reeper or something, tee hee hee, with his weapon too.
It's good otherwise though, anyways, continue your great work, tee hee hee, I'm still rooting for you, please continue soon, I really do look forwards to the next chapter, and hope you have a great day...tee hee hee, arigato for the update and hope you will please continue this story soon. Matta ne, until the nect update.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin indeed. Now, that pity party is over, its time for Rin to stop beating herself up for things
she can not control and start taking control over her own life. She is an intelligent
woman that has a lot to offer. Kagome needs to understand that it was not Rin's
fault and stop blaming her for her lack of romance in her life. If she does that then maybe
she would find mister right. Sess need to go into his true character when it comes to Rin and
that is to be more aggressive. Go after her See and to hell with anyone thinks. Update soon girl.
she can not control and start taking control over her own life. She is an intelligent
woman that has a lot to offer. Kagome needs to understand that it was not Rin's
fault and stop blaming her for her lack of romance in her life. If she does that then maybe
she would find mister right. Sess need to go into his true character when it comes to Rin and
that is to be more aggressive. Go after her See and to hell with anyone thinks. Update soon girl.