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for A Never-Ending Love

by DragonGrl0701

person Vanessa
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup. You tricked me, I thought there was going to be a lemon. : ( Oh well. It was great. You know you are a great writter when you hook us into the writting. Good Job
person Vanessa
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup. You tricked me, I thought there was going to be a lemon. : ( Oh well. It was great. You know you are a great writter when you hook us into the writting. Good Job
person Ren
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T.T huuu, it took so long, I've waited so loooong....I was bawling...seriously, bawling, my little sister smacked me for it. Huuu, but other than that, WAI! WAI! YOU'VE UPDATED, WAI, WAI, WAI, WAI!!!!! ^_^ I'M SO HAPPY, TEE HE HEE, I love the chapter, I hope later on Kagome will understand her sister's feelings. Tee hee hee, I wanted to ask though, how he see her memories if they were just kissing??? *Blinks cluelessly* I'm not very good at emotions, sort of like Sesshoumaru, I'm cold to the core now...tee he hee, when you didn't updated, A LOT, and I mean A LOT!! Happened, sheesh, I really was starting to gibe up hope...T.T my life is boring, my mother doesn't want me going out because of the rapers and kinappers these days...*sighs* what to do? Oh wells, I'm so happy you updated, **tears hope you will continue again soon. Oh yes, when I do read the lemon, don't worry, I'm not a picky person, I'm still rooting for you!!! All the way, right! Tee he hee, keep up the great work, and don't worry about outside visitors, I hate them too, especially when they argue wtih you. You think they'll get a glue, it's your home right? Arguing with you is like, saying, 'I want out...' but yea, sheesh, I'm almost anti-social as they would call me, I noticed the great grammar also, I'm really proud to say I am one of your faithful readers...your story is one of my best story yet. Please continue soon, arigato ne, and matta ne, until the next time...^_^
person animegirl007
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job!!!...At least he found her ,.....Now, let's see how you work Kouga into the plot again.....Also, you spelled his name wrong again....Sesshomaru ...only one u....not that big of a deal but just FYI....keep it coming please!!!!!
person New Fan
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a good chapter. How much influence will Kouga have on Rin and Sess relationship? Will
he test Rin and Sess relationship greatly? Update soon.
person Mmoirai
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well! This is a groovy story! I read all 8 chapters in one sitting and I am aching for more! I am usually not a fan of FanFiction that has Sess so out of character, but I just flat out like your story, no matter the characters! Anyway, maybe I missed it, but is Sess a demon? Is Kouga? I assume so since Sess has yellow eyes and silver hair, but do they have their powers still? Anyway, love it! Can't wait for more!
person gina
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!!!!! truly!!! i can't wait for more!!! =)
person aoi37
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!! You suckered me into this, now I have to know what happens.
person joe blanchard
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading all eight chapers and I must say that this is worthy of a newbery honer award. I can't wait for the happy ending!I do hope this will have a happy ending,I just can't read something sad.
person sphinx
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story.. detailed enuf to explain how rin managed to survive on her own... kagome is "bit cruel here.. i thought that since she lives separate frm rin she might still keep in contact wif her... but i'm a little puzzled here.. is rin working or studyin? else how did she keep up with her expenses, i mean yesh there's inheritance but anithing else? and who's in charge of her parent's comp nw? issit kagome? update soon!!!