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This story is getting better and better. Shame on you will not answer my other questions?
You will definitely keep me watching out for your next update. I hope that will be soon.

Tee hee hee, nice update, thanks a lot for updating on such short notice. I liked the chapter a lot, please continue when you have the time, I really do not wish to burden you with the responsibility of updating faster if it interrupts your life. Tee hee hee, I do not, and I'm pretty sure every other reviewer would agree that we do not wish for you to update if it bothers/troubles you in any way. We all probably want our authors to feel relaxed and relieved when writing, that way they can make great work such as yours. I thank you a lot for double checking the story you write, no wonder your grammar was so good. Tee hee hee, but anyways, just wanted to ask, if this is able to be fulfilled, if you may please add a little of Sesshoumaru's point of view too, it's really hard to interpret his thoughts and actions. I was wondering if he really did care for Kagome though, she seems like a good person and she shouldn't be toyed with, I hope you will be able to keep up your great work, and also please clear this up for me.

Arigato again for the great chapter, and also for the great grammar you always present, I hope you update again some time soon, but don't push yourself and also thanks for the hug. ^_~ tee hee hee, matta ne! The ending of the chapter was a real shocky, and what's up with Sesshoumaru checking Rin out so much?

P.S. I'm also known as Vikki, if you didn't know that tee hee hee...^_^ good day, sorry for my idiotic memory, sometimes I forget which name I should use and confuse my authors...gomen su!

Wow, this story is great! Very orginal, though I have to admit, I was slightly put off by the similarties in your first chapter to that of Maggz. I'm glad you cleared that up that she beta'd for you. Which is awesome! I love the plot and I hope there's more Sess/Rin moments soon!
~Bgatorgirl86

ah...a love triangle? i hope it wont destroyed kagome and rin's relationship... update soon, it a gud original story.. Rin/sess = best couple

Please update soon, I'm really into this particular story, it's really good, it's almost like the story I'm also currently into right now, it's called, Ugly-beautiful, also on this web site. You see, I want to see him bond with her, like one day out of the blue Kagome had to work till very late, and Rin then take Sesshoumaru to the private little beach Rin had showed the others. There they could bond, I don't know, I just wanted to see some bonding moments, other than that, I really like this story a lot! Please, please, please, update soon...^_^ arigato if you are 'listening' to my request, I am eternally grateful if you fulfill it. I'm always a fan of yours, tee hee hee, I am hoping to see another great chapter soon. Arigato again and matta ne!

omg!!! i have to say that this is one of the most amazing fics i have read in a long time.. very wel thought out.. i can't wait to read more!!! very well done you have a new fan!!! =).. i couldn't stop reading.. i didn't want to but then i had to becasue there was no more to read =)

I have a question, will Inuyasha show himself in this story to cause more havoc?? Is sibling rivaly be in the near future? Up date soon.

this is great update update

This is my first time reading this story. I read all three chapters and I notice in the first chapter that
the writing style was similar to Maggz (who is by the way one of my favor authors). If you are getting any
input or assistance by her then this will be rated as one of the best stories (about Rin and Sess) on AFF.net.
Please I hope that you will update really soon.