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Heck. I got chills reading your story ! The tragic circumstances surrounding Rin seem to be so overwhelmingly insurmountable but you've made her a quiet heroine who can and does arise above it all. It will be totally sweet when Sess and Rin finally acknowledge the growing attraction/love they have for each other.

It seems almost worthwhile to write a chapter with Sess's POV. I would like to see how his emotions migrated from Kagome to Rin....what made him recognizes that he'd rather be with Rin above all others.

Keep up the great authorship.

By the way, not only you can write emotionally to tug at the heartstrings of your readers but the grammatical accuracy is top-notched.
I value both the mechanics as well as the aesthetical beauty of a story and this contains both.

Please update fast. Your story is making me cry really bad and I love it. One thing why is Sesshoumaru so nice? I mean no offenses I just always have know Sesshoumaru as a distant cruel man always trying to hisder his feelings. Is this like another tihng or sometihng? well keep writing I love crying to roamnce

That was the most heart wrenching chapter I ever read. It almost brought a tear to my eye (I could not cry
because I was at work).^_^ Can you please put me on your email address so that you can email me
when you will be updating. Thanks. Please update soon.

Tee hee hee, @---)---)----, Roses are red, Violets are blue, Sesshoumaru is sweet, and so are YOU! Tee hee hee, but he is a little out of character, but I like it, he's very sweet, tee hee hee. Even though you will not write about Sesshoumaru's point of view, I like the story still, thank you for clearing that up for me. I was going to ask if you will write a mini sequel about his point of view then. It would clearify everything in my head, like what is he thinking? What is he feeling? You know things like that, other than that, I love the story, keep up your fabulous work, I'm rooting for you! ^_^, don't disappoint me please. Arigato for the update and matta ne till the next update

I was crying right next to Rin. That poor girl has gone through so much. Now things can only get worst for her
now that she has a pad to go to as well as a car to get around. Will Inuyasha be in this fic? Update soon.

I really like the Hojo part.....most people dump on him, but I think he is a nice guy. So, Rin will be moving out soon????? When will Sesshomaru decide to move to a hotel because of his growing feeeling for Rin???? I wish Kagome let him know how she feels so he can go now to Rin....... Keep it coming .....I really love it........and my comment before about Sesshomaru coming into her room......you are right....Sesshomaru is the exception to the rule......and when it comes to Rin and Sesshomaru I do break the rule all the time.....

This story is a mistery. I really like it please e-mail me when you write the next chapter. I love Sesshoumary and Rin fics. It is very interesting how you put Kagome and him together. I wanna see where this is going. I confess id like to be caressed by his hands. (im loser) good story I love it so far.

nice story. i can't wait to read what happens next.

I just found out that you updated....nice chapter, sweet but little creepy.....It was sweet that Sesshomaru came into her room and check up on her, but how strange to have a total stranger walk into your room without permisson, hot or not.... A Kouga ..Wow!!!!!....so, he is going to be the villian in your story or are you planning a couple others?????.... I loving this story now.....keep it up please...

Oh me oh my. This is one of the best fics I have not seen in long time. Keep it up. I just
hope that Rin and Sess does not fall in love to fast in this story. I want drama, suspense,
and lots of heartache until everyone ( I hope will be happy) with the ones they need to belong
too. I can also see (please do not think that I am trying to change your story. It just a thought)
instead of Inuyasha, Kagome and Kouga triangle, I hope that its Inuyasha, Rin and Kouga triangle instead.
Please, you said that you have twelve chapters written. Let chapter 5 be release this week. PLEASE!! Update soon.