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for What Never Should

by FireandIce

person Modesta
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it right there it was so intense!!!!!!!!!!!! i seriously need to find out what happens i was so in to it and then it stopped. IT STOPPED!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO YOUR ADORING READERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But seriouly it was real good you definately know how to write. Please update it soon,or
i'll..........i'll..........i'll DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyou, and you take heiroglyphics classes???....Thats cool.must be hard.
person Chiaki Dark
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A HEARTSTOPPER!!!!

*grabs at frozen heart*

I would have called it a cliff-hanger, but seriously, this is one of my favorite reads-I have so much emotion invested in it, and it stops there?!

*gasps for breath*

I know I haven't reviewed earlier, but I like to wait until the fic is completed-but I just had to make an exception because DAMN. Stupid, jealous, WEAK, Kagome!! I usually don't care about her either way-I don't care for the female characters usually-but your characterization of her makes me loathe her. Now-that might not have been your true intentions but I'm so about to kick her ass!!! *fumes*

Oh Inuyasha!! Oh Sesshoumaru!! I PRAY TO THE YAOI-GODDESS that everything will work out??? *whimpers*

GREAT STORY! Seriously-one of my favorites. :] Thanks for sharing, and please!! UPDATE SOON!! :] x 3
person Angelic-kill
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice lemon in chap one. chap two was nice hehe
person ice
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that wasnt fair!!!! i wanna know whats going on???!!! what happend!! u just can leave it at that
person firekitty
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHH OMGGGGG !!!!! UPDATE SOON!! HOW EVIL OF YOU TO LEAVE US ON SUCH AN EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!! RARGH!!
person RogueSilver
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was long???? Well, time must be going fast for me! Great chapter! How could you do that to Inuyasha *cries and whines* I love him!!! but sadly he belongs to Fluffy! Oh well his happiness is more important! Update ASAYC!
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with this story. But I must admitt that I haven't the slightest clue what happened at the end. How did Inuyasha get up so fast? Did the arrow hit Inuyasha? Will he be okay if it did? I hope Sesshomaru kills Kagome, she's a stupid stluty bitch. So please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^_^Bye

~~Isis~~

person sessrocks
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! You had to stop there. This was absolutely wonderful. KAgome is being very cruel! I cannot wait to see how this would go. I am guessing Sessy is going to be mighty angry.
person foxykittykat
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person Dilly
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome is a fuckin' bitch that needs to be killed or put into her place along with Naraku. God, i fuckin' hate them. Good chapter and i really like this story...keep up the good work.
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