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for What Never Should

by FireandIce

person Anon
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was worth the wait!
person Amaya
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah! great fic. uhh what will happen to sango since she'll be miss lonely. sango: im lonly mrs. loney i have nobody
person Eye of Ra
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it! lol. i think it was rather worth the wait. ^^ and if i wasnt so half asleep from only getting a few hours of sleep this afternoon and not so great sleep for the last nearly two weeks... i would leave you an even better review than that! lol. o O ... seriously.. but its good you're getting better. keep it up. ^^ we'll still be here. heh. or at least i will. no matter how half asleep and sleep deprived i may be. ^_~

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person Kei
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin the story. And once you made a comment about Kirara. It is spellt Kirara because it's japanese and in Japanese "r" tends to sound more like "l". So yeah... But I do like the story. Good work
person T.T
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep on goin u stopped
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm relatively new to the InuYasha genre, and was immediately drawn to the delicious SessxInu incestuous pairing. I love brother sex. Your story is hot, with an interesting plot. And I'm a sucker for a good mpreg fic. Nice job.

regards--

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person Too Sexy for my clothes
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg great fic. im lovin it. cant wait for kagome beat down!!!!
person Aniu
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY!!! great fic keep going onward!!!!!
person Aniu
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah anon shut-up your not making the the story. the writers know what they're doing. -- over a little spelling error
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ITS FUCKING KIRARA!!!! GODDAMN YOU PEOPLE!!! DONT YOU KNOW ANYTHING?!!! THE JAPANESE HAVE NO L IN THERE LANGUAGE. THE R IS SUPPOST TO ROLL OF OF THE TOUNGE LIKE A L DOES!!! BUT ITS KIRARA!!!! STUPID ASS WRITERS!!!