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for What Never Should

by FireandIce

person sophia
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the best inuyasha fanfic i've ever read. this is terrific. i give u and A+++++
person Punishment
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and UPDATE this thing already! You're killing me over here!
person Kiara
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the fic, the plot is really nice and full of surprises. I loved everything except one thing. I hated the fact that the last baby died, could you please bring him back with Sesshoumaru's Tensaiga? It would be really great. Anyway, wonderful writing. Can't wait to read the next chapters!
person Michelle
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm begging ya here!You must update!!I'm gonna go insane if you don't!I want to see if Sesshomaru-sama's going to be okay!!He's one of my favorite characters!I'm glad Koga's okay and so is Miroku, but Inuyasha is obviously feeling weak and Sesshomaru is most likely fatally injured!I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one to ask you to update, but I hope my review will let you know that there are a lot of people out there who like this story.Just look at all your reviews!!
person chibirin8
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon!! XD now to say what I was going to say what the HELL are you doing first you try and kill sesshomaru and then you make him blind only for im to get back his site again and now you are trying to kill him again what to you like killing sesshy you know because that is not nice he is so bishie. well I hope there is some what of a happy ending meaning that sesshomaru doesnt die and him and inuyasha and have lots more sex. YAY for boy love!!! Well anyways I love the story so far and as I said I cant till you update again ill be checking back to see what you do. ^_~
person ALYSSA
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!I LIKED THE PART WHEN SESS. FINDS OUT IUNYASHA IS PREGANT.BUT I HOPE YOU CAN FINISH THE STORY SOON.
person D/H
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i read all the reviews from everybody, like i always do when a particular story/fic interest me..
I read that last chapter and i actually had tears in my eyes...One ? thou....I know there was 4 pups and one
died but by reading the last chapter..It seems too me that there was only 2 pups left..What happened to the
3rd pup?? I only read the last chapter becuz i was CURIOUS too see if Sesshoumaru died or not and HE better
not becuz that's the whole point of the story and hell, what's is wrong with Kagome and Sango..?? I guess being
dumped by the guys you're in love with or whatever is that bad..There's a saying..Never mess with a WOMEN/GIRL
that's SCORNED and these TWO are perfect examples...I only read the last chapter and i hate them already..I can't
believe how EVIL Kagome is..I mean, i can pic her that evil becuz there's alot of fic that due portray her as such but
never would i image Sango but i guess i just haven't read enough...I will read this fic later on, i think..Just too see what
happens in the end...
person kat
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just found your story and i read it in one breath^_^ It's great!!! I hope that Kagome and Sango get back to normal, because them being bad gets a little on my nerves:))) but you made all guys gay! so please come up with someone or something for the girls;)
anyway, I love it! Please update soon.
person Fan1
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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person Anon
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shame on Kagome and Sango trying to kill Inuyasha's pups. I'm glad that none of the pups were harmed., it's also sad that Inuyasha's fourth pup didn't make it *sniff* Please let Sesshomaru, don't let him die. Anyways gr8 chapter, and enjoyed the previous chapter as well. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next, so please write more soon.