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for What Never Should

by FireandIce

person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful fic. I am soooo enjoying it. Sess can't really be dead, can he? You have me glued to my seat. This is so perfectly written too. WoW! That's all I can say, just WoW!
person libra_ryu
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far, and can't wait to see how the others react to Inuyasha. The thing with Sango's cat, though. In the Japanese version the name is Kirara. It was changed to Kilala in the English version. Don't know why.
person Kaorustalker30
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, Kagome goes ballistic. What an awkward situation - Kagome hearing Inuyasha moan Sesshomaru's name while jacking off. lmfao American Pie worthy. Very good chapter, I feel sorry for poor Inuyasha though, his ass must be in constant agony. Masochist = Inuyasha? hmm lol

Oh, and I think Sango's weapon is Hiraikotsu. It literally mean's 'Flying Bone' but I've seen other's translate it into 'Demon Bone' and more often, 'Boomerang Bone'.
Great chapter overall, Inuyasha going feral on Kagome was a definite plus, almost wish he tore her limb from limb - but then that'd definitely put a damper on the hunt for the Shikon... (She's a nice girl, but she abuse's Inuyasha like a kid with a 'Tickle Me Elmo!' Doll; she keep's pushing and pushing until he breaks, and then want's to get all upset when he strike's back. Fucking Idiot. I swear, if I hear 'osuwari' one more time, I'll 'Sit' her, very painfully.) *grumbles*
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign iN)
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH You have to update soon!!!!!! I love this story. It is so awesome!!!! So when do we get an update??? Man I hope it is soon I wanna see the complete mating session! WHOO! And damn Kagome!!! If she messes with Inuyasha again Sessy should kill her. Yep Yep. Fucking bitch I HATE HER. Anyway... I love what you are doing with this fic and I like the way you had Sessy protect Inuyasha how kawaii!!!! That was just awesome! Okay I am so done... update SOON!!!!!!
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is very good, well done. ans sango's weapon is called "Hiraikotsu". Keep up the goop work ... :D
person nicole
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a cool story. wish to read more! I must be out of my mind, but I just think those two are hot. Of course that's just me! Love your story. Love It!
person whirleeq
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good, but I have one constructive bit of criticism for you: watch your use of tenses, when you write. You jump back and forth from present and past tense quite frequently, and it can be a little confusing for the reader. Other than that, good job so far...

person aphinna
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it update soon
person shameika
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic please write more soon
person Shinna
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love reading Inu/Sess fics. Keep up the good work.