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for What Never Should

by FireandIce

person My Sweet Koinu
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* Oh, that was SO SAD!! *cries loudly* For once, I am actually very sad that Sesshoumaru died (or did he? I really, really hope not)... The Inu brothers are my favorite yaoi couple, this story is the best one yet I have read for them! Kudos to you! I really hope Sesshoumaru comes back, before something...bad...happens to Inuyasha.
person Fire Kitty
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really really good story, and its great that you update it every day! I hope sesshoumaru is...umm...not...dead or...zombiefied...yeah..<.< >.>
Cant wait to read the ending! Its sure to be a great as the story:o
person Kaorustalker30
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stares in despaired shock* Se..seh..Sesshomaru... *wails* He's dead?! And now Inuyasha thinks that he broke his promise. I hope nothing happens to Rin on her way toward Kaede's Village, and that Inuyasha at least gets Sesshomaru's message... *sniffles* He's not... really, really, *really* dead is he? *tear's well up in eye's*

schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blink-blink…blank stare* Ohh ..OMG what happened in chapter 4..OMG..don’t want to give it away…but why do I feel like Inu is fixing to go all youkai on Naraku’s fine ass!!!(not like that wouldn’t be hot….oops off subject) Wow!! You go these chapters out quickly (3 and 4) Good job!!
person firekitty
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was an awesome story. i almost felt like crying at the end...keep up the great work^^
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I was totally not expecting Sessy to DIE!!! ::Sobs:: How are they going to be together now?! ::Whimpers and clings:: BRING HIM BACK!!!

Okay I am done ranting...

Anyway great chapter, totally unexpected things happening. I like the way you write, and that part where he tells them to tell Inuyasha he's sorry and he loves him I thought I'd burst into tears...

Okay I did...

HAPPY NOW?!

::Giggles:: Update soon!!!
person maria
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person Bakura
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill Sesshy!
He's... well, He's Sesshy! and he's cute!!!!!!!!!
make Inuyasha revive him or something ;_;

oh, and the fic is great. Inuyasha's bit OOC, but it's fine.
Lemons are great, too. I love to see Inu chan in pain ^_^

update~!
person ichie-chan
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!SESSHOUMARU IS DEAD!!!!!!AND HE BROKE HIS PROMISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT IS INUYASHA GOING TO DO!!!!!!!!!!!11111
person Polka dot
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i doubt naraku could deafeat Sessy but it was an unexpected twist. Sad for Inuyasha though.