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for Seshiko

by Wheezambu

schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!!UN-FUCKING-BELIEVABLE!!! the ending was OUTRAGEOUS!! Ichigo was Inutaisho's son! wow!! I loved this story, now I have to read the ones that come after this one!! keep up the good work!
person sancho
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate and love, how you get me into these characters. how you make me love them and feel thier passion, their angst.



you're incredible
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was, to put it simply, brilliant. I've been reading a lot of your work posted here. you have a very twisted, cunning, creative mind. you're a good writer too.
person gizmo
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it you should continue!!
person ldymoon(nsi)
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was very good! I know you conjured up Ichigo for a reason, will we see him again in another story? Perhaps in the youkai and the exterminator? Huh? Huh? You can tell me. He sounds so hot half wolf half inu rock hard body and just a feralness that is hot! Girl, I'm addicted to all of your stories and I can't wait for you to finish them so I could read them.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...i liked it, escept for the end. i didn't really like him being aspy, and it did't seem quite right. i liked the rest of the story htough.
person paranoid
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ihigo turned the tables! (said in a sing-song voice) Lovely, just lovely.

I read this before I read the longer one. Whose child will she bear?
person pyro_witch
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O woow i did not expect that turn in the story it was so good!!!! great job ^___^ i loved your storie
person Nokomarie
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I liked that character and could wish he'd show back up again somwehere.
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! wanted to say that first, I haven't read the other story, but I plan to, you did chap 2 very very well, the whole slowly give was great and in line with the rest of the story.

WOW he was a double spy and INu half brother, he should get his own story about going to the east and finally falling in love or something!!!

the chap and story was written very well, you lemon was descriptive and well put together and had the right pitch. i.e roughness etc for the characters.

Great job!