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for Toying Around

by dragonlorelei

person Kellie
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what I wouldn't give to have that happen for real. I'd have Inuyasha, Kouga, Sesshoumaru and Naraku at my beck and call! ^___^

Great story idea, I like it. Please continue ^___^
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm. intresting plot idea. never really read something like this in inu fiction. very well put together. hmm...so, inu is a life sized 'ken' doll. that's halarious. try putting that on a resume. LOL. very well done. i'm intrested to see just what kag does with this new 'toy' (who she has exposed to herself when she was a chld....o_O). opps? (another fun thing to try to explain). hehehehehe.
person turtlerad
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this looks good. I'm giving a guess that the doll was human Inuyasha under a spell/curse
person robertsmithsgothicmistress
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cool plot, I can't wait to read more! :)
person Kiwichan
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....interesting, The movie you were talking about....was it "Life Size" starring Tyra Banks and Lindsey Lohan. Sorry couldn't help but ask cause I love movies...anyway, sounds like an interesting story, can't wait to see more!
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
I do seem to recall a movie done by Lindsay Lohan and Tyra Banks...the girl wished her barbie was real and *poof* there was a life size and fully alive version of her doll.
ANYWAY, it works well with the Inuyasha characters. I hope to see another chapter soon...this seems fairly intriguing. So until then,
Claire ^_~
person Ka-chan23
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting plot you've got going here. I agree with the other reviewers, this does seem like the movie Lifesize, but let's just hope Inuyasha doesn't go back to being a doll in the end ^_~ I really like this story so far and it's definitely caught my interest. Originality is hard to come by now-a-days considering all the thousands upon thousands of fanfics out there. It's refreshing to come across a new, original story like this one, even if it is leaning towards the idea of a Disney Channel movie. I pray that you will keep going with this fic and not leave us in suspense for too long!