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for Unbreakable

by Pflow

schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please add something to this. It is such a good start. I would really like to see more.
person Hatiyai
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is an awesome intro chapter. You HAVE to finish it! It'll be an awesome story. So, please update soon.
person Star
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good. Please write me. I will be looking forword to reading the next chapters.
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Jt
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll say this much, I'm quite surprised at how the women are treated. But, it is not unheard of. Keep writing. I am curious to see what is next.
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks like a good read to me. please continue
person theangernthetruth@hotmail.com
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i really like it- i hope you decide to continue to write it here....but i was wondering ( i know she was "given" to sesh and all) if it is kag/inu or not
person Tom
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...... This intrigues me. Please do continue.
person Tris
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i usually read harry potter, but i love the way the story is going so far. update!!!!!! huggles ~ tris
person fffffffffff
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its dorky and kinda dumb