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by nelliegirl

person vic
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make more plz ur a awsome write but put more lemones
person Animefreak242
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW!!! ^o^ How sweet~! And you even had Sesshomaru save Inuyasha. How brotherly. *sniffle* I'm feeling very sentimental right now. *nods* And I completely forgive you for dragging this out so much. Especially since you put plenty of violence in these past two chapters. ^-^ You're the greatest!! *hugs you* You killed Kikyo and Naraku in fell swoop (she better be dead). Not to mention bringing Samou back. *cheers*

But now what? What'll happen to Inuyasha? *curious* I sensed more than a little forshadowing there with Dr. Alessa. Will she heal him in more ways than one? I hope so. Poor thing, I was angry with Inuyasha, but now seeing how he was munipulated and left for dead by his own (new) wife, I feel sorry for him. He diserves to at least be a little happy. Especially since you had hi save Kagome and fight with brother instead of against him (for once).

Well, if I wasn't hooked before, I am now. = D I know you're busy - we all are - but I hope you have/make time in the near future to update. I'm DYING to know what'll happen next (presumably Sango'll tell Kagome about her baby and Inuyasha and Alessa's relationship'll begin to develop, but what else?). Till next time... *wavies* ^o^

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
person AnimeFreak242
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! *bangs head against my desk* Why did he sign it?! Why?!?! *cries* And why are you torturing us like this?! You are horrible! HORRIBLE!!! *still crying* --Not really, I actually like the way you've written this. It builds up the suspension--

But Naraku has Kagome and... And now someone other than Sesshomaru and his employees know what's happened to Kagome... and the video has FINALLY uploaded! ...God... *sigh* Maybe Inuyasha can shred the marriage certificate? Or have it anulled? And Kikyo wouldn't get anything b/c Inuyasha doesn't really have anything, right? >< Gaaah... I'm gonna read the next chapter. Please update soon...
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Ashley
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS OR WAS THAT THE ENDING? HOPE NOT BUT ANYWAYS STILL AS GOOD AS ALL THE REST YOU HAVE REAL TALENT KEEP IT UP MY FRIEND
person kat
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! I read all the chapters. and I think that your story is one of the best fanfics I've read!! Question for you..
Are you going to make any more chapters to your story?? Because if you are I wan't to be the first one to read it : )
I think that your writing is the best of the best. If I could publish it I would. But unfortunatly I can't. I'm being seriouse here!
Don't laugh! I'm just telling to utmost truth. Please email me back.
Thnk you!!!
Sincerly,
Kat
person SesshouChick9000
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY DID U STOP THERE AHHHH THE LAST CHAPTER WAS IN-TENSE YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS I LOVE YOUR STORY FINISH IT I'M DYING OF ANTICIPATION!
person kagome1312
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its gettin good plz update soon!!!!!!
person lost child
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! how mean, what a time to cut off the chapter. You better update soon, I have to know what's going to happen, what is the end result. I hope they survived and Naraku died. Great story, keep up the good work
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?