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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated. Cool ring. I knew something was up with that. Ha! Naraku didn't get what he wanted. I still feel sorry for Inu, but he did it to himself. It is nice that you have Kagome and Rin developing a mother daughter relationship. Poor Kagome. I hope she makes it to the party. Sesshoumaru will have one hell of a fit if she doesn't. I anxiously await an update. BTW, there were quite a few mistakes. You might want to get a beta. There is an announcement in the above paragraph. Beta's are waiting in the wings. I've started using one recently and she's doing wonders for my writing.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn just when it was getting good you had to go and stop writing.... Anyways, I still love the fic. I hope you update sooner I got in the habbit of reading two chapters every other day and now its been almost a week.... Damn readers I know, but hey its the price one pay's for your writing ability..... Update soon. Peace.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!! Dude!! You can't leave it there!!! EVIL!!! This is quickly turning out to be a favorite of mine!! Please update soon!!!!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice cliffy... oh my this is one awsome story and cant wait until you update...
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what chapters.... You had my head spinning in suspence I loved it when you deflated Kikyou. Poor Kag's hopefully Sessh will get her back and Inu boy realizes the stench belongs to Naraku.... Keep up the good work.....
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bravo bravo what gearness i cant wait till next time
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luvd it!!!!!!!!!!!!! but wuts gonna happen next????????????????? plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapters..... I love it when a plan of mischief fails causing havoc I just love it.... Poor Kagome when will Naraku stop harassing better yet I can't wait to see Inu boys face when they show up at Inu Yasha's party.... I hope you post the chapters soon....
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm...you have a lot of wrong words there..."nuance" intead of "nuisance", "in counter" instead of "encounter," "hear" instead of "here". Yes, I know those are all from the second chapter, too, but there are errors in Chapter 1 as well. You might want to consider finding a beta.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update I want to read KAgura geting her *cencered* handed to her